Comment from
Jacob1395
Your poem paints a clear picture of the horrors and atrocities that are taking place around the world. It is so heartbreaking to think about what's going on. A well written piece.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from
JSD
So true. You sum up the plight of the world so successfully in your little 5-7-5, saying so much in a mere seventeen syllables. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023