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Everything I Hope For

Everything I Need

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A poem about loss and the grief suffered can be painful and debilitating. There is a glimmer of optimism in these few words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much! Lately, I find myself grieving mor about my wife, so
    I wanted to writ something that didn't seem totally depressing.
Comment from Navada
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This is a poignant and lovely piece. I think most of us here can relate to the feeling of being separated (temporarily) from a loved one. Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much! Except for the time her father passed away, we hardly were ever separated in all our years together and each day without her brings tears. But joy cometh in the morning!