Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Um, Tooth Fairy, you must have written this poem long, long ago, because I know for a FACT --from my students who share this information with me-- that these days you never leave less than FIVE dollars. And, on several occasions --especially for a first tooth-- you've left TEN.

But regardless of the amount bestowed, you ARE an amazing creature, and I hope you do really well in this contest. xoxo

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Thank you so much! I am thinking in the past I guess. xoxo

reply by Rachelle Allen on 10-Nov-2023

Yes, having fond memories, I bet!!

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Yes I was!

reply by Rachelle Allen on 10-Nov-2023

hahahhaha

Comment from créateur d'histoire

Excellent

I loved this! You had a great and cheerful ending.You're rhyming was great.The Ryme did not take over the essence of the story. Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a unique and interesting poem for the challenge. Good rhyming and imagery make this fun to read. I enjoyed this excellent work!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This very nice. I don't think I've seen a tooth fairy poem but this works. you have a good rhyme scheme, and this could fit for children or their parents, as the words are simple to follow and it reads quickly.

A very strong entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Thank you so much!