Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I just read your entry. It is a simple but loving statement of when your life truly began when you found love.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

thanks as always

Comment from créateur d'histoire

Average

great rhyme. It sounds like you found a soulmate. Realtionships that begin anew
and remain so are few. I wish you good luck in the contest. Hopefully we can both win.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

thanks same to you.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

As I told another, perhaps you should add some sort of photo or illustration. You employed eight effective words, and it's words that count, but some reviewers seem to like pictures, as well.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

good point

reply by jim vecchio on 07-Nov-2023

This was something I was told when I first joined FS, so now I regularly use some kind of picture.

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

yeah it is a good suggestion