Reviews from

The Choice

This way, or that. Choose and commit.

6 total reviews 
Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This contest winning piece of genius should have a six star review in any universe.

So, I have fixed that! Great and very funny piece of funny! Most enjoyable.
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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you immensely!
    And thank you for the six stars!
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This eight-word poem, The Choice, has the proper word count and includes the contained choices within the explanation given to we readers who might well choose the road not taken.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Oooh! Cleverly done! It's a theme-and-variation on the iconic Robert Frost "Two Roads Diverged in a Yellow Wood." But you brought it new life and charm. I hope you do well in the polls! Good luck. xo

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you.
    For these voters, I'm afraid I needed a cat on one fork and a grandbaby on the other.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 08-Nov-2023
    hahahahahahaha!!! Very true.
Comment from Aiona
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What a cute poem.... I love the double entendre of "left" and "right." It follows the 8-word prompt and uses the prompt so skillfully that it seems of the poet's choosing, and not a mandate of the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
    Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Wendyanne
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Lol I love this play on words! In just eight words you have described the struggle we have to make decisions at times. especially the big ones. I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    Thank you.
    Hoping others see it in the same way.
Comment from Sally Law
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This is a very powerful choice between right and wrong. Doesn't our soul know it though. My conscience is faithful, and never lets me be.

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
    Thank you.