Ghost
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "The Noose"Biography/Supernatural
17 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This really is the beauty you see around you now, and the beast you were living with and his brutality towards a young girl, both physically and mentally it had it's affect on you. Thankfully you are a survivor.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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This really is the beauty you see around you now, and the beast you were living with and his brutality towards a young girl, both physically and mentally it had it's affect on you. Thankfully you are a survivor.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Valda thank you. You're very kind! I'm always happy to see you here. That shall not change. I appreciate everything you say to and you're usually exactly on the money in what you say. Thanks again have a grand day!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I cannot believe that someone could be so cruel just for sport and how your mom just let him do that to her own children. You are a true miracle that survived all of that. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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I cannot believe that someone could be so cruel just for sport and how your mom just let him do that to her own children. You are a true miracle that survived all of that. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much Iza! You know myself fucking back safety two of them with I wonder too how someone could be so cruel and indifferent and has so little compassion. I cannot forgive the action honeybee. Will forgive the person depending.
Forgiveness does not mean condoning the behavior at all. I think it's more for myself but I will get there. I thank you very much for your wonderful review and if you're super sweet comments and your insight is amazing. Thank you glad to see you here!
Comment from royowen
Every time I read what your stepfather did makes me angry, and I think I would have pasted him, just for fun, but one day he will get his, unless of course he sorrows before and meets God, beautifully written Lea, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Every time I read what your stepfather did makes me angry, and I think I would have pasted him, just for fun, but one day he will get his, unless of course he sorrows before and meets God, beautifully written Lea, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much roy i'm always happy to hear from you! I have many thoughts along with Lynn's hoe. Yes, i've patricide, it was almost an option. However my brain steps in every time and says don't be stupid. Thank you again for reading along with me. I'm happy to see you here. And happy to read your comments didn't receive your review thank you again!
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Bless you Lea,
Comment from LJbutterfly
Each chapter is more and more difficult to read. My first thought was that you could have gone to the police to show your wounds. But, that wouldn't have worked. They would have put you in social services...Your grandmother's social services. You would have ended up back where you were. Your parents think they've got you in a bind with no way out. But they don't know you are a thinker, and thinkers find solutions.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Each chapter is more and more difficult to read. My first thought was that you could have gone to the police to show your wounds. But, that wouldn't have worked. They would have put you in social services...Your grandmother's social services. You would have ended up back where you were. Your parents think they've got you in a bind with no way out. But they don't know you are a thinker, and thinkers find solutions.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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You are very wise and that's exactly true. I thank you for your kind review once again. It's so nice to see that beautiful flower come up in my reviews. I appreciate this so much. Thank you for hanging in there. It is hard. I know. I hope it can become teaching tools for some thank you again. I hope you have an amazing day!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is definitely difficult to read. Thank you for the warnings in advance. This sounds just awful, horrendous.
Little suggestion:
With the buckle out the long, thin prong of buckle sticking out, he began to walk on my back, my butt, and the tops of my legs.
For some reason I am a little confused if he was walking with his feet, or with shoes on, or if you mean a verb like 'work over' instead.
Each time the buckle connected a new welt and puncture mark appeared.
I would add a comma after the word connected.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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This is definitely difficult to read. Thank you for the warnings in advance. This sounds just awful, horrendous.
Little suggestion:
With the buckle out the long, thin prong of buckle sticking out, he began to walk on my back, my butt, and the tops of my legs.
For some reason I am a little confused if he was walking with his feet, or with shoes on, or if you mean a verb like 'work over' instead.
Each time the buckle connected a new welt and puncture mark appeared.
I would add a comma after the word connected.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you for noticing these edits. I really appreciate them. They can only make my work better. So yes, valuable valuable to me very much. I appreciate your kindness is well. I shall go ahead and make those changes. I hope you have the best day thanks again!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
It seems like if you had gone to the local police and shown them the abuse, you would have been put in some kind of social services place of safety. That bastard should be in jail, even if it happened years ago. As for your mother, she should be placed in an institute. She's obviously not in her right mind. I'm burning with anger when I read this gal. I'm so sorry you had to endure this. No one should ever have to put up with this abuse.
Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
It seems like if you had gone to the local police and shown them the abuse, you would have been put in some kind of social services place of safety. That bastard should be in jail, even if it happened years ago. As for your mother, she should be placed in an institute. She's obviously not in her right mind. I'm burning with anger when I read this gal. I'm so sorry you had to endure this. No one should ever have to put up with this abuse.
Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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2 reasons I couldn't go to the police one cause. I was controlled by fear and 2. Because it would mean going to social services and in social services. My family is very influential 2 of which are higher up every time. Or I should say the 2 times that I did have prope social services prior. Diverted to my grandmother as a favor as they called it to her. Paperwork arriving for all these incidents is going to corroborate everything. I had looked at much of it online there is so much material there. Thank you again tom you are the best happy to see your review as always!
Comment from Ulla
I don't really know what to say, Lea. Your story left tears in my eyes, though. Why do men do these things? They must feel so inferior and afraid of the female gender that all they can do is to resort to violence. I'm so sorry you had to go through this, but pleased that you can still find solace in the beauty surrounding you. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I don't really know what to say, Lea. Your story left tears in my eyes, though. Why do men do these things? They must feel so inferior and afraid of the female gender that all they can do is to resort to violence. I'm so sorry you had to go through this, but pleased that you can still find solace in the beauty surrounding you. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Ulla thank you so much for your kind words! Fear is a very powerful motivator and can make you do things you didn't think you would or could. I appreciate your thoughtfulness, your kind words and for reading and your wonderful review too is always welcome. Thanks, have a great day!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You do an excellent job in these posts of describing the difficulties of your early life. The action is very clearly described, we can picture the scene easily and the pain. kay
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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You do an excellent job in these posts of describing the difficulties of your early life. The action is very clearly described, we can picture the scene easily and the pain. kay
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you Kay I'm so happy to see your review! Your comments are valuable to me because you are such a prolific and talented writer. I'm happy to receive any and all comments that can improve my work. Yours especially I'm happy to have you reading along! Thanks again!
Comment from BethShelby
I like the way you are alternating the present with the past as you relate your story. That is a unique approach and it works well. I would have been good if you could have had pictures of all these times when you were so severly abused. I anger is the thing thay kept you going. It seems everything ;you did enraged him. With a temper like that, it don't understand why he didn't abuse your mother as well.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I like the way you are alternating the present with the past as you relate your story. That is a unique approach and it works well. I would have been good if you could have had pictures of all these times when you were so severly abused. I anger is the thing thay kept you going. It seems everything ;you did enraged him. With a temper like that, it don't understand why he didn't abuse your mother as well.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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My mother was a collaborator not an enemy or what he considered subservient. In fact, he spoiled a rotten. She was always happy with her life. Paid no attention to ours. Thank you, Beth. I'm so happy to have you here. Appreciate you so very much! I hope you have the best of days!
Comment from JSD
The fairy of your strong soul is sitting on your shoulder all the time, dear Lea. And the stars are looking after you. This is horrible but I know the end is nigh. x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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The fairy of your strong soul is sitting on your shoulder all the time, dear Lea. And the stars are looking after you. This is horrible but I know the end is nigh. x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you, John Bianca's comments and increments buttercups. Nonetheless, there's a bit more journeying to do through my childhood, and that will be end of ghost book. 1 of 2 will be called specter and it is the involvement of my family in my adult life has taken everything from me. Except for me. I remain myself. No matter what they do. Thank you very much, my friend. This will come to an end and when it does. I shall put it on a shduff. And I'll know that i've done everything I could in a positive and constructive way. Thank you my friend you are the best!
