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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Another day another shot towards your freedom no matter the cost. You were brave to protest and in the same time a short victory. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Another day another shot towards your freedom no matter the cost. You were brave to protest and in the same time a short victory. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you one more time Iza you are very insightful reviewer I thank you for them every time and always happy to see you come up my apologies for my late reply I hope that you have a wonderful day and a great New year too!
Comment from Austin Yu
Your writing is truly something out of this world. Congratulations on 2nd place by the way! Going back to the story, I was amazed at how well you handed the rude remarks of your stepfather. Truly, only the most loving people will feel uncomfortable with hate, even if its against the most despised people in your truly. It says something about your personality, which I love.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Your writing is truly something out of this world. Congratulations on 2nd place by the way! Going back to the story, I was amazed at how well you handed the rude remarks of your stepfather. Truly, only the most loving people will feel uncomfortable with hate, even if its against the most despised people in your truly. It says something about your personality, which I love.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Austin thank you so much for your kind review and your kind comments I'm so appreciating them truly I'm sorry I was unable to get back to you sooner I had a terrible accident and suffered third degree burns. I wanted to thank you for this and to wish you a happy New year and hope that your Christmas was great! Thank you again!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your determination was what was holding the light at the end of that long tunnel, Lea. Determination for yourself and your sisters to be able to get out. I remember when we were olittle sharing the bath. My sister first, then ,me then my brother. But we were able to top it up. Then Dad would bucket it out and put it on the garden.
Onto the next chapter,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Your determination was what was holding the light at the end of that long tunnel, Lea. Determination for yourself and your sisters to be able to get out. I remember when we were olittle sharing the bath. My sister first, then ,me then my brother. But we were able to top it up. Then Dad would bucket it out and put it on the garden.
Onto the next chapter,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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I'm glad you are able to have that mercy. I have no qualms about sharing B
bath water. What I had a qualms about was not being able to be a warm. His claim was we were using too much energy. He was often a cruel man at best at his worst there was blood. I thank you so much for reading i'm so happy that you're here truly!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This post reminds me that gardening gloves from the dollar store are something I take for granted. That is really strange, even more strange than nineteenth century customs, to have the adults get the clean bath water first, and no one was allowed to have clean water after that. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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This post reminds me that gardening gloves from the dollar store are something I take for granted. That is really strange, even more strange than nineteenth century customs, to have the adults get the clean bath water first, and no one was allowed to have clean water after that. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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It was another form of humiliation and abuse that he came up with. He had a few funky ideas let's say. He was a bad dude with a really wicked temper. There's no good memory that I can recall with him. He told us that he didn't like to waste hot water. Yeah okay... Thank you very much again for your comments again. I am truly honored to have you here. Thank you my friend I hope your day is amazing!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
I can't understand the reasoning behind them wanting you to use the used bath water. When I was living on the farm, we had to pack water from the creek or have it run into a garbage can on the porch from the downspout. There was no such thing as a water heater, we had to use a wood stove, and though it could get quite hot, it took a long time, depending on the quality of the wood we were burning. I think we only took a bath once a week. Once I moved to town I took a hot shower every day, using as much hot water as I wanted to. What you had to endure was just about criminal gal. Maybe it was criminal. I'm sure that there had to have been health issues working in the leech field of the septic tank. At least you made it through, though not unscathed, obviously. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
I can't understand the reasoning behind them wanting you to use the used bath water. When I was living on the farm, we had to pack water from the creek or have it run into a garbage can on the porch from the downspout. There was no such thing as a water heater, we had to use a wood stove, and though it could get quite hot, it took a long time, depending on the quality of the wood we were burning. I think we only took a bath once a week. Once I moved to town I took a hot shower every day, using as much hot water as I wanted to. What you had to endure was just about criminal gal. Maybe it was criminal. I'm sure that there had to have been health issues working in the leech field of the septic tank. At least you made it through, though not unscathed, obviously. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hi Tom well, you had definitely a childhood to Hey? My parents own defishing and hunting resort. We get everything off. Grid gravity feed water pipes that ran through the wood stove, so it would heat up as it went through holding tanks in the loft. I understand what you're saying. Thank you again always happy to see you here and I always appreciate you I'm not alone on this journey because of people like yourself thank you again!
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Hi Lea,
actually, I grew up in Ohio, with all the normal things like indoor plumbing ect. It wasn't until I moved to Alaska when I was 24 that we experienced all the issues of trying to make a living in the wilderness.
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Oh I see well I understand that kind of living haven't lived it myself. Something to be said for that, though. Really appreciate things more in many ways and you learn a lot too. So I hope I see that you made it through. I hope flip was a good experience for you. I think you mentioned that it was have a great day!
Comment from LJbutterfly
The image of the bath tub scene won't leave my mind. OMG! To have to get into dirty water that two adults have already been is horrifying. Just when I think things can't become worst, they do. I hope you have time to make a plan and time to execute it. Under the circumstances, it will be difficult. I'm glad you are sorting all of this out.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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The image of the bath tub scene won't leave my mind. OMG! To have to get into dirty water that two adults have already been is horrifying. Just when I think things can't become worst, they do. I hope you have time to make a plan and time to execute it. Under the circumstances, it will be difficult. I'm glad you are sorting all of this out.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for your kindness. It warns my heart knowing that there are still good people in the world like yourself. Yes, I will get out. I wish there was one shining answer for at all. But there wasn't a piece at a time I suppose there's a method to that. I thank you so very much my friend appreciate you very much!
Comment from JSD
Again, your style of the prologues and epilogues add such a layer of dramatic irony to the whole narrative process. I love it, the way you separate yourself from yourself. Well done, as usual. x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Again, your style of the prologues and epilogues add such a layer of dramatic irony to the whole narrative process. I love it, the way you separate yourself from yourself. Well done, as usual. x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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John so glad to have you here! Really you always have great things to say that are so supportive and insightful thankyou!
Comment from Jim Wile
First of all, congratulations again on the success of your story, Lea. It's a well deserved honor for a story that is so compelling that I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
It's hard to believe your parents can sink much lower than how you've previously portrayed them, but they seem to outdo themselves with each new chapter, this one included. You've done a great job showing how your anger is building, and we can really sense the coming confrontation. I think they've maybe met their match in you, as your anger is now fueling your determination to beat them. You go, girl! - Jim
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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First of all, congratulations again on the success of your story, Lea. It's a well deserved honor for a story that is so compelling that I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
It's hard to believe your parents can sink much lower than how you've previously portrayed them, but they seem to outdo themselves with each new chapter, this one included. You've done a great job showing how your anger is building, and we can really sense the coming confrontation. I think they've maybe met their match in you, as your anger is now fueling your determination to beat them. You go, girl! - Jim
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you. Jim a** is being kicked, as we speak that there was a matter of survival so survival I did today is another matter today. It's out there. That's good for me. I just put it in a box one on the shelf phone. I'm done I appreciate you so very much. I hope you know have a great day!
Comment from Chuck Keller
And the beat goes on.
When I went through SERE (Survival , Evasion, Resistance and Escape) training at Camp Pendleton in California, similar feelings were exposed.
But at least I knew it would end.
Your descriptions are heartbreaking and tragic.
You are a GREAT writer, Lea
Thanks again for taking me through this with you.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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And the beat goes on.
When I went through SERE (Survival , Evasion, Resistance and Escape) training at Camp Pendleton in California, similar feelings were exposed.
But at least I knew it would end.
Your descriptions are heartbreaking and tragic.
You are a GREAT writer, Lea
Thanks again for taking me through this with you.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Chuck thank you Very much your appreciation your Is compassion your insight in your Kind comments always nice to see your name come up. I appreciate it so much have a great day!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Good freaking gawd!!! Just when I think there's nothing worse he/they can do, then I read about the bathtub hierarchy? This is Hitlerian in its lack of humanity. I am simultaneously sick to my stomach and furious after having read that! You can not get out of that nut house soon enough!!
Well done, Lea. You are doing a masterful job with this autobiography. I'm very proud of all you've accomplished here. xoxoxo
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Good freaking gawd!!! Just when I think there's nothing worse he/they can do, then I read about the bathtub hierarchy? This is Hitlerian in its lack of humanity. I am simultaneously sick to my stomach and furious after having read that! You can not get out of that nut house soon enough!!
Well done, Lea. You are doing a masterful job with this autobiography. I'm very proud of all you've accomplished here. xoxoxo
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you my friend! I appreciate your comments. And you're reading and all the wonderful things you have to say. Thank you Rachelle you rock!
