Ghost
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Traveling over the last couple of weeks has got me behind on reading and reviewing, but I'm diligently trying to get caught up or as close as I possibly can. Glad to see you are full throttle ahead. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Traveling over the last couple of weeks has got me behind on reading and reviewing, but I'm diligently trying to get caught up or as close as I possibly can. Glad to see you are full throttle ahead. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Hi Ric! Glad to have you back! Thanks for reading and catching up. Thanks for your reviews. I'm happy to have you here. Humbled and honored to receive them as well. Hope you're having a great night!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yuk. It's a wonder you didn't end up with some dreadful virus having to do that in the septic sludge. To me it's hard to fathom how you was able to keep going with them, day after day and still have the determination in you to get out. Well done, Lea.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Yuk. It's a wonder you didn't end up with some dreadful virus having to do that in the septic sludge. To me it's hard to fathom how you was able to keep going with them, day after day and still have the determination in you to get out. Well done, Lea.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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I could have gotten many viruses working around in that terrible sewage muck and yuck. He knew it too and he took pleasure from it. I could just swing a bat at his head every time I think of it. But what I wanna do and what I did do are often two different things. Thank you for your understanding for your support and your kind words. I appreciate it so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hi Lea, all I can say is that you are very resilient person that managed not to get lost in the labyrinth of hardship and abuse... And also, it makes me angry on your mother that gives the rain to some stranger to abuse her kids. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Hi Lea, all I can say is that you are very resilient person that managed not to get lost in the labyrinth of hardship and abuse... And also, it makes me angry on your mother that gives the rain to some stranger to abuse her kids. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you again Iza!
Comment from royowen
Despite the fact that I didn't have a particular ot compassionate mother, I think I had it pretty good compared to you, I had a gentle father, who was pretty good to me on reflection, although he worked seven days a week, weeds around sceptic tank, how awful, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Despite the fact that I didn't have a particular ot compassionate mother, I think I had it pretty good compared to you, I had a gentle father, who was pretty good to me on reflection, although he worked seven days a week, weeds around sceptic tank, how awful, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thank you again. Ryan always happy to see you. Appreciate you supporting this book and reading along with me. And you're a kind compassion towards me as well for reading. Thanks for being here blessings to you too!
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My pleasure
Comment from Gunner Lil
Another wonderful tale of real life. An easy read again. Super sensory descriptions. I could almost smell the odor from the septic tank. It really is bad.
Thanks again.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Another wonderful tale of real life. An easy read again. Super sensory descriptions. I could almost smell the odor from the septic tank. It really is bad.
Thanks again.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thank you again appreciate you reading along and offering your thoughts. I thank you too for your fine review and for your great reading. The one thing about writing non fiction is that don't have to come up with material. It's already there. I just opened my mouth and out of comes. I should say my proverbial pen. Actually, thank you again for your fine review and your kindness. I hope you have a great evening!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Boy, pulling overgrown weeds where murky water was likely to collect could not have been healthy at all. This chapter reminds the reader that ongoing tasks were made even more difficult due to sheer inconsideration of a stepfather.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Boy, pulling overgrown weeds where murky water was likely to collect could not have been healthy at all. This chapter reminds the reader that ongoing tasks were made even more difficult due to sheer inconsideration of a stepfather.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Yes, he like to give you a task and make it difficult just to see what you do with it. You also like to pretend to punch it and then pull it back at the last second and think it was funny. Of course we had to laugh along with him. I appreciate you reading. I really do and appreciate your comments and your suggestions. Keep them coming I love them thank you very much again my friend!
Comment from JSD
Great stuff. Getting stronger and stronger. And your fight against the vicious weeds and the septic slime is symbolic of your fight against the weed that is 'him'. Brilliant writing. X
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Great stuff. Getting stronger and stronger. And your fight against the vicious weeds and the septic slime is symbolic of your fight against the weed that is 'him'. Brilliant writing. X
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you, John. I'm always happy to see your review as your comments your suggestions. Everything is very valuable to me. I thank you again my friend and know that you are very much appreciated!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a painful part of your memoir, both to read, and I think to write. I hope you will find the strength to carry on with this, thanks for sharing. kay
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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This is a painful part of your memoir, both to read, and I think to write. I hope you will find the strength to carry on with this, thanks for sharing. kay
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you Kay. I appreciate you stopping in and reading and offering your kind thoughts if you wish. These chapters can be found in a book called ghost. In my portfolio in auto bile. I would say that some chapters are hard to read. To so you know, thank you again for your review. Thank you for reading. I appreciate you very much thanks again!
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning dear Lea,
I decided to do a bit of editing on this newest write of yours...
Hope you do not mind...
"I hope you had a good long rest, ge something to eat them get dressed."
think you meant to write...
I hope you had a good long rest, GET something to eat AND get dressed.
"Shoes, thin jackets"
You do not need an S after jacket.
"On the left side, where the septic tank was, was overflowing. "
I think you meant
On the left side the septic tank was overflowing. so no need for the second was.
Lisa
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Good morning dear Lea,
I decided to do a bit of editing on this newest write of yours...
Hope you do not mind...
"I hope you had a good long rest, ge something to eat them get dressed."
think you meant to write...
I hope you had a good long rest, GET something to eat AND get dressed.
"Shoes, thin jackets"
You do not need an S after jacket.
"On the left side, where the septic tank was, was overflowing. "
I think you meant
On the left side the septic tank was overflowing. so no need for the second was.
Lisa
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Hi, Lisa, thank you so much. I'm gonna go ahead and make those changes right away.
I have made some changes already. I appreciate you and your help as much as I wanted and needed. Thank you again! Have a great day!
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I really want to go back to the beginning and edit all your work...if need be but I am so busy... Just finished a Christmas fair where I sold my water colour art...
Lisa
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I know where is Lisa whenever you are able to find by me. Congratulations on selling your artwork, that's a wonderful thing you aren't talented. Indeed, you're awesome day!
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You are welcome,
Lisa
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
What the hell was wrong with this clown that he doesn't even get the septic system pumped out? It's a wonder you didn't get cholera or some other disease standing in that waste. Didn't you have neighbors? Someone to complain about the jerk? I don't know how you did it. I would have found a shovel and clobbered him over the head and then buried him in the leech field where he belonged. There were a few things that need edited I believe.
Ge something to eat- get, should watchful be watchfully? In any event, another great chapter gal. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Hello Lea,
What the hell was wrong with this clown that he doesn't even get the septic system pumped out? It's a wonder you didn't get cholera or some other disease standing in that waste. Didn't you have neighbors? Someone to complain about the jerk? I don't know how you did it. I would have found a shovel and clobbered him over the head and then buried him in the leech field where he belonged. There were a few things that need edited I believe.
Ge something to eat- get, should watchful be watchfully? In any event, another great chapter gal. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I agree and about the same many times as one I mean, you I had to shoot my lips it out me too, so i'm formed to plan and fairly quickly like the best laid plans, you know, sometimes there's a wrinkle. Thank you again, Tom. I'm so happy to have you on this journey with me. I hope the day is great too!
