The Penguin
Wishes!2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A nice presentation, and you
followed the prompt directions very well.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-You also tell a story within the poem.
-I like how you characterize the penguin
and personify it with his wishes.
-Good use of dialogue supports the earlier lines.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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-A nice presentation, and you
followed the prompt directions very well.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-You also tell a story within the poem.
-I like how you characterize the penguin
and personify it with his wishes.
-Good use of dialogue supports the earlier lines.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review Pam!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendyanne
well you have certainly used RUN in a FUN way in this little rhyming piece of poetry. You have managed to conjure up a delightful image of a penguin trying to run. Very amusing. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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well you have certainly used RUN in a FUN way in this little rhyming piece of poetry. You have managed to conjure up a delightful image of a penguin trying to run. Very amusing. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review!
