Soul-Searching
Where you hope to end up requires deep thought.34 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Beth,
Congrats on your 1st place win in the 6 Word Poetry. This is a insightful and thought-provoking write that speaks to the process of inspiration in writing.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
Beth,
Congrats on your 1st place win in the 6 Word Poetry. This is a insightful and thought-provoking write that speaks to the process of inspiration in writing.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Eugene. I really appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
Comment from gudbjorg
Very well done, the picture points upwards towards heaven and brings in the beauty in life. I like the text because it is true. I give you 6 stars for well written and meaningful write. I love it.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
Very well done, the picture points upwards towards heaven and brings in the beauty in life. I like the text because it is true. I give you 6 stars for well written and meaningful write. I love it.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Miranda Langston
Holy Mothers :O I can see why this won first place. This is an incredible thought-provoking piece using only six words. Jeez. I'm seriously impressed...
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
Holy Mothers :O I can see why this won first place. This is an incredible thought-provoking piece using only six words. Jeez. I'm seriously impressed...
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you Miranda. I seriously enjoyed your comment and I've very grateful of the six stars.
Beth
Comment from dragonpoet
High Beth,
I like the alliteration which seems to help get the point across. You must think before you decide which is the right way to go.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
High Beth,
I like the alliteration which seems to help get the point across. You must think before you decide which is the right way to go.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you Joan. I was surprised by the win. I don't even understand how six words can be a poem but I appreciate the congratulations.
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You're welcome, Beth.
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you. Again I'll take the gift card.
Elizabeth Shelby
5563 Old Hunter Rd. Ooltewah, Tn 37363
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This has got to be a winner, Beth. It's brilliant! I love the alliteration in each line, and how well it works. The picture is perfect, leaving me to ask, What came first? Superb, my friend. Good luck in the contest!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
This has got to be a winner, Beth. It's brilliant! I love the alliteration in each line, and how well it works. The picture is perfect, leaving me to ask, What came first? Superb, my friend. Good luck in the contest!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Sandra. I would be shocked if I won anything more from a fanstory. I wrote the piece first and then when to Google for some way to illustrate it. I was lucky to find that.
Beth
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WooHoo!!! You did win!! Congratulations! It was so very deserved. 👏🏻👏🏻🎉🏆🥇xxxx
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Thank you. But I'm almost embarrassed to win two $100 gift cards in one week. I down even understand how 6 words can be called a poem.
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You shouldn't worry about that, winning twice only shows how talented you are. Enjoy your wins. xxx
Comment from L. Kalere
Words of wisdom with nice alliteration. You made good use of every word, and the image is perfect. Kinda wish I understood this when I was younger. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
Words of wisdom with nice alliteration. You made good use of every word, and the image is perfect. Kinda wish I understood this when I was younger. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Linda. I think it take a bit of maturity to realize this. When we're young we don't come with understanding of we tend to lead with our emotions.
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You're probably right:))
Comment from gramalot8
Great message in your six expressive words. I especially like the line "Decisions determine destination". Every single decision we have chosen makes us what we are today and will determine our future. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
Great message in your six expressive words. I especially like the line "Decisions determine destination". Every single decision we have chosen makes us what we are today and will determine our future. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for an excellent review. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Soul Searching, has the proper word count and relates to the process of receiving data, analyzing it, and making decisions based on the foundation established to provide criteria for action.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
This six-word poem, Soul Searching, has the proper word count and relates to the process of receiving data, analyzing it, and making decisions based on the foundation established to provide criteria for action.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Bill. I always appreciate your review.
Beth
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Great and brilliant. In so few words, you give sound and reflective advice to think carefully before we act.
Great presentation to compliment your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
Great and brilliant. In so few words, you give sound and reflective advice to think carefully before we act.
Great presentation to compliment your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you Mary, I really appreciate the review. I'm glad you feel this is sound advice. Too often we act on emotion withoug giving something the deep thought that is called far.