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Taking Responsibilty

We are responsible for all that takes place in our lifetime.

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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I believe that you have a good message that all of us can understand and follow. We leave behind more than just things when we go. Those that we touch we pass along bits of us to others. In that way we are immortal. Karen

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you. I love the way you think, and it shows in your writing too.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Does that make you a "niece rescuer"? Ha! Great entry for the One Sentence Contest.

Not sure how you did, but I bombed out on that one. But, a lot of people laughed at my piece so that is a win in itself!

I enjoyed this writing, my friend. D

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you. Yeah, I bombed out, too. I did come in third but it was winner take all. It was a fun challenge anyway.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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HAHAHAHAHA. This was extremely entertaining. I've known people who talk like this, so that made this especially amusing to me. You certainly responded to the prompt and got a lot in within the confines of one (albeit run-on) sentence. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I have a friend who talks like this; you can't get a word in edgewise. It was fun to write,
reply by Rachelle Allen on 29-Oct-2023
    It was also fun to read.
Comment from Daylily
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It appears that you are well surrounded with outstanding companions. I would love to have a second cat but, alas, my apartment is not big enough. I like that your niece is there with you and, obviously, loves animals, too.
I enjoyed reading your entry very much. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Thank you. It was a fun prompt to write. I like the challenge of these things.
Comment from jim vecchio
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I just told one writer some may say she needed two sentences. In your case, you may need 100. But, I'll count it as one, and that is bestest sentenciest sentence I've read thus far!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Thank you. Yep, in normal writing it should have been several sentences. It was a fun challenge.
reply by jim vecchio on 29-Oct-2023
    Just reaing your post was fun! Thanks for writing.
Comment from gramalot8
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I actually really enjoyed reading your one sentence story. I totally get it about wanting to outlive our beloved fur babies. I'm 75+ and that's my goal too! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the silly writing. It really is my goal to outlive the cats and my dog. My dog is fourteen, my oldest cat is twenty-two, and the youngest is six. That means I must live to be ninety or more.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Yes, we are responsible for so many things in our lives. We often don't realize that. I enjoyed reading. The artwork you chose goes perfectly with this entry.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I'm gald you enjoyed the writing. It was a fun and challenging prompt.
Comment from Lisasview
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Looks like you did great writing a story for the The Sentence is the Story writing prompt for the contest.
I enjoyed reading it...and I too plan to live a healthy active life into my 100's...
Lisasview

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and intend to join me as a long-living person.
reply by Lisasview on 28-Oct-2023
    Okay we should meet one day... ah ha.. I am from California but now am living in Costa Blanca Spain... A real adventure... staying here (except for traveling) forever...
Comment from Wendyanne
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Wow that's a long sentence and I see it is not fictional. Your words are very true. If we take on animals then we are ultimately responsible for them for the rest of their lives. You have expressed your thoughts and feelings well.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I find these kind of prompts fun to write and they are a challenge.
Comment from JSD
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Excellent. I wondered how long one could make a sentence and you have pushed it to the limit I reckon. This is very well written and enjoyable. Well done and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I could have made it longer, but I figured enough is enough. Glad you enjoyed it.