Say What?
Do not judge me!10 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I love how you've said, "No offense to any real lunatics out there." LOL. Now you have me wondering if maybe I might be one of the real lunatics you talk about. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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I love how you've said, "No offense to any real lunatics out there." LOL. Now you have me wondering if maybe I might be one of the real lunatics you talk about. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Ha! You know what they say. If you look about the room and don?t see the lunatic, it?s probably you. Ha! Thanks for the review.
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Comment from Sally Law
No offense taken, although because of my deep sensitivities and empathetic nature, I, too, have to sit myself down for an intervention, and have a long talk with me, myself, and I, and prescribe, but not limited to, a therapeutic pint of mint chip ice cream.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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No offense taken, although because of my deep sensitivities and empathetic nature, I, too, have to sit myself down for an intervention, and have a long talk with me, myself, and I, and prescribe, but not limited to, a therapeutic pint of mint chip ice cream.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Ha! This was simply a satirical swat at our crazy society driving us all bonkers!
Comment from jim vecchio
That's nothing. Wait till those voces start speaking in Japanese. Anyhow, this was great, humorous, and indeed was a long sentence. Loved tht photo! Hope you win the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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That's nothing. Wait till those voces start speaking in Japanese. Anyhow, this was great, humorous, and indeed was a long sentence. Loved tht photo! Hope you win the contest!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Ha! Didn?t even place. My sense of humor takes a special type of warped mind, my friend. Wait, you said this was humorous?
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It wasn't me-It was the voices that told me to say it.
Comment from Thesis
This is an interesting entry describing the humorous interaction between the characters' multiple personalities and the voices inside his head who had an interaction with him for talking to himself, so he now has to keep his thoughts private. The concept is hilarious. Good entry.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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This is an interesting entry describing the humorous interaction between the characters' multiple personalities and the voices inside his head who had an interaction with him for talking to himself, so he now has to keep his thoughts private. The concept is hilarious. Good entry.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Yes! The concept was great. I think this one came close to what I was trying to do here. Thanks!
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. I read a not too different longer one with a similar theme - perhaps you wrote both. Lol. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Well done. I read a not too different longer one with a similar theme - perhaps you wrote both. Lol. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Wendy!
Comment from Sarita Méndez
This is a funny story, I like the idea of the multiple personalities asking for a meeting to discuss with their owner altogether !
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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This is a funny story, I like the idea of the multiple personalities asking for a meeting to discuss with their owner altogether !
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Ha! Made me laugh.
Comment from Wendyanne
Easier said than done lol. We all know how it feels to have different voices in our head and I don't mean psychotically, I mean normally! I get sick of the voices lol. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Easier said than done lol. We all know how it feels to have different voices in our head and I don't mean psychotically, I mean normally! I get sick of the voices lol. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Yea, how much is fact or fiction?
Comment from pome lover
That's a clever, short, and pretty funny story. I wonder if you are as concise when you talk to yourself. :) Also great accompanying picture.
I didn't see any conflict in the middle that was overcome (as I have been instructed that all stories need, but maybe the judges aren't that strict.)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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That's a clever, short, and pretty funny story. I wonder if you are as concise when you talk to yourself. :) Also great accompanying picture.
I didn't see any conflict in the middle that was overcome (as I have been instructed that all stories need, but maybe the judges aren't that strict.)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Nah. It?s not me sentence. Ha!
Comment from Jacob1395
That would be spooky if something like that was to happen, almost as if our own sub conscience is trying to warn us. A well written piece, I thought it flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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That would be spooky if something like that was to happen, almost as if our own sub conscience is trying to warn us. A well written piece, I thought it flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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How do you know if didn?t?
Mahahahaha
Comment from Judith B.
I love this! You say so much in so few words--a skill I do not have. And you say it with a sense of humor. I will watch for more of your writing. The creative thinking that went into this is amazing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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I love this! You say so much in so few words--a skill I do not have. And you say it with a sense of humor. I will watch for more of your writing. The creative thinking that went into this is amazing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you! Judith. Awesome Review. Seems like we may be the only two who liked it! Too dark? Ha!