Ghost
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Loved the lightheartedness of the leaf up my nose paragraph, Lea. You are doing well telling your story.
Edit - the direction I was going was took me farther and farther away. seventy five (five) cents
Well written, with a lot of different emotions showing.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Loved the lightheartedness of the leaf up my nose paragraph, Lea. You are doing well telling your story.
Edit - the direction I was going was took me farther and farther away. seventy five (five) cents
Well written, with a lot of different emotions showing.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you again my friend. I'm really glad you like this!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
well done gal. I could feel the struggle of having to move your feet forward when all you wanted to do was rest and give up. I'm glad that you made the correct turn to take you to civilization. Finding the jacket was an added bonus too. Sounds like someone was looking out for you gal. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Hello Lea,
well done gal. I could feel the struggle of having to move your feet forward when all you wanted to do was rest and give up. I'm glad that you made the correct turn to take you to civilization. Finding the jacket was an added bonus too. Sounds like someone was looking out for you gal. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Phone, you rock, you're always there and providing a kind support and reading my work. That's really grealways important to me. I have mentioned before and I'll mention it again valuable. Like all I hope you're feeling okay tonight and things are going well for you. Thank you again, have the greatest evening!
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is some intensely great writing. It is full of suspense and fear.
I could feel it because I have lived it. Fight or flight. If you made the hard choice to hide from my step-father you had better stay hidden.
Flashback city. Thanks for sharing. Glad you survived.
D
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This is some intensely great writing. It is full of suspense and fear.
I could feel it because I have lived it. Fight or flight. If you made the hard choice to hide from my step-father you had better stay hidden.
Flashback city. Thanks for sharing. Glad you survived.
D
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Douglas I so appreciate you coming in for a read. I really do if you wish you're welcome to go into my portfolio. You'll see a autobiography called ghost of which this chapter is a part of. I'm happy you enjoyed my writing and that you stopped in to offer your comments is valuable to me. Thanks so much. I hope I didn't bring up too much for you. And that you're having a great evening!
Comment from Lisasview
Wow, you are really getting to the heart of your story... Such trauma and great that you can write it down and hopefully let go of it... As you say there is always a wellspring.
Lisasview, getting colder here in Spain
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Wow, you are really getting to the heart of your story... Such trauma and great that you can write it down and hopefully let go of it... As you say there is always a wellspring.
Lisasview, getting colder here in Spain
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you lisa, I so appreciate you reading truly and your comments are always welcome! It's getting cold here, too on the west coast, canada although we are in the warmest part of the country, we still get pretty nippy in the winter time. The rabbit hole goes so very deep so deep that my grandmother is not the rescuer but the reason which I will write about. Thank you again so much hope you have an awesome night!
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You are so very welcome...
Oh Canada...I did not realize you live there.
Lisa
Comment from Wendyanne
What an horrendous experience you have been through and you have described it so vividly. I can picture the scene you have described and can feel the anxiety and pain you must have felt.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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What an horrendous experience you have been through and you have described it so vividly. I can picture the scene you have described and can feel the anxiety and pain you must have felt.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Wendy, I appreciate your kind review. It's very insightful too I must say if you wish you can look at my portfolio and Then there's the auto bio called "Ghost" of which this chapter is a part of you're welcome to read if you wish have any time. I would suggest to everyone reader discretion is advised. Thank you again, Wendy, for your kind comments and wisdom. Hope you enjoy your night!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oy, the terrors you had to suffer during such early years of your life! This is heart-wrenching and gut-wrenching. You are AMAZING to have survived at ALL, let alone to have become such a warm, considerate, appreciative, wonderful human being.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Oy, the terrors you had to suffer during such early years of your life! This is heart-wrenching and gut-wrenching. You are AMAZING to have survived at ALL, let alone to have become such a warm, considerate, appreciative, wonderful human being.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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That is high praise Rochelle! Thank you so very much! I do have scars as would be natural by work with those things every day and I became aware which close of it start to come in now.
I have introduced my grandmother to the story so far everyone thinks she's great. The rabbit hole goes so very deep. Thank you so much, you always know how to give me a smile. I hope your day is amazing, thanks again!
Comment from JSD
Another excellently conveyed step on your journey. Still longing for an end, but I guess that I must be patient, as you had to be at the time. Thank you for continuing your bravery in writing this.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Another excellently conveyed step on your journey. Still longing for an end, but I guess that I must be patient, as you had to be at the time. Thank you for continuing your bravery in writing this.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you John! I am honored to receive your review as always. And appreciate everything you have to say...the rabbit hole goes very, very deep my friend in spans of years. All the way up to attempted murder. More will follow thank you so much again hope you're evening is great!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
It seems like that awful experience of homelessness leads to the greater chance of becoming ill. It also seems like one can never take for granted the ability to buy things to eat or even to take a simple bus ride.
Little fix:
Down the road shone the yellow sign in brown lettering that said, "Tim Hortons"
I would just leave the quotation marks off unless they were literally also on the sign. I suspect it said Tim Horton's.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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It seems like that awful experience of homelessness leads to the greater chance of becoming ill. It also seems like one can never take for granted the ability to buy things to eat or even to take a simple bus ride.
Little fix:
Down the road shone the yellow sign in brown lettering that said, "Tim Hortons"
I would just leave the quotation marks off unless they were literally also on the sign. I suspect it said Tim Horton's.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Absolutely good advice I went ahead and took the quotations off. Thank you for noticing that and commenting. I appreciate all of those kinds of things because that's how we learn. I appreciate your awesome review too, and for hanging In there with me and reading my story. I appreciate all your kind comments and your insight and your awesome rating. . Hope you have a great night!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Wow! One lucky young lady to have survived that ordeal. So you spent the night in the leaves? Any idea how far you went? Or how long you were away?
Nicely written story.
Have you ever read Stephen King's 'The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon'?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Wow! One lucky young lady to have survived that ordeal. So you spent the night in the leaves? Any idea how far you went? Or how long you were away?
Nicely written story.
Have you ever read Stephen King's 'The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon'?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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I've probably read 95% of Stephen King's novels including his psuedonym Richard Bachman. But that particular one I have not read.
I walked 2 days to get out the one night I spent in the forest was underneath the pile branches leaves anything I could insulate myself with. It was warm enough, but it was definitely dirty.
I was in the forest for almost 6 months total. Thank you, Wayne, for your fine review of game. You know, I'm always happy and appreciated to receive them, so I'm going to sound like a broken record. I'm gonna tell you all the time, thanks again. Hope you're having an amazing night! BTW the rabbit hole goes very very deep. Even as far as attempted murder.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You're such a sweet person, Lea, and I'm so sorry to read of your upset yesterday, even though it was mixed with faith and determination. Your reader wants you to leave that forest behind so badly, especially because every detail you describe seems to be a further attack on your already fragile, unwell being. The relief when you finally make some headway is therefore immense and, of course, you have some good fortune in your discovery of the jacket. You've now escaped that jungle and have reached civilisation. But what next? A small edit: "I knew this, the direction I was going was (taking)..." This is such an engrossing read that leaves the reader feeling as shattered as yourself. Thanks for sharing it. Debbie x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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You're such a sweet person, Lea, and I'm so sorry to read of your upset yesterday, even though it was mixed with faith and determination. Your reader wants you to leave that forest behind so badly, especially because every detail you describe seems to be a further attack on your already fragile, unwell being. The relief when you finally make some headway is therefore immense and, of course, you have some good fortune in your discovery of the jacket. You've now escaped that jungle and have reached civilisation. But what next? A small edit: "I knew this, the direction I was going was (taking)..." This is such an engrossing read that leaves the reader feeling as shattered as yourself. Thanks for sharing it. Debbie x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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I'm so happy you like this writing Debbie. I continued to be surprised two reasons. One, first and foremost, the support I've receive is wonderful. You and Rachelle, two most amazing Ladies! Thank you again! I will go ahead and make corrections thank you for everything!
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I think you're pretty amazing too:) We both love you.
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Thank you!
