Golden days
Loving life11 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
Love your photo you have chosen. It alone tells us tge story... great complement to your words. Not many couples make it to 50 years together for a variety of reasons. It's always special to honor them when they do. Great entry for the one line poem contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Love your photo you have chosen. It alone tells us tge story... great complement to your words. Not many couples make it to 50 years together for a variety of reasons. It's always special to honor them when they do. Great entry for the one line poem contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. Jen
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from Sarita Méndez
This is a beautifully well written one line poem about love.
The picture you chose perfectly fits your poem, I love it, it is a beautiful and touching image.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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This is a beautifully well written one line poem about love.
The picture you chose perfectly fits your poem, I love it, it is a beautiful and touching image.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Golden Days, uses five words and makes the final vow to remain steadfast and contented from now until the final sunset on the last day.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This one-line poem, Golden Days, uses five words and makes the final vow to remain steadfast and contented from now until the final sunset on the last day.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is lovely. Where do you get those moving pictures? The one-line poem says a complete thought.
These little ones are so hard to do. They are a lot harder than the big ones. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This is lovely. Where do you get those moving pictures? The one-line poem says a complete thought.
These little ones are so hard to do. They are a lot harder than the big ones. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. The picture is from FanArt.
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u r welcome Karen :-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest. Yours is my favorite.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Excellent entry for the 1 Line Only writing prompt contest. Yours is my favorite.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
A positive and meaningful one line entry, which encourages others to do likewise. Very nice presentation as well. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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A positive and meaningful one line entry, which encourages others to do likewise. Very nice presentation as well. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Wendy
Comment from Lisasview
Well, for sure the moving artwork image really draws the reader in... and the words are so very wonderful.
Can I make one small suggestion? I think the words need to be centered under the image rather than at the side...
Just my thoughts..
Lisa
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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Well, for sure the moving artwork image really draws the reader in... and the words are so very wonderful.
Can I make one small suggestion? I think the words need to be centered under the image rather than at the side...
Just my thoughts..
Lisa
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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I agree but don?t know how to do it
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Oh it is so easy...
Just go into edit on your work and put your curser at the very left of your first word that then click the space bar and it will move your words to the right and when the line is centered...make sure to press save.
Lisa
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I did it!!! Thank you so much for your tuition. I am so crap with technology. X
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Oh good, I am so glad I could help... please leave me a review comment for my help ... I am always helping but seldom does anyone take the time to let the committee know,
Lisa
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How do I do that?
Comment from Wendyanne
In one sentence you have expressed your love for your partner in, "Cherishing our golden days together."
This gives me a warm. fuzzy feeling of everlasting love! Well done.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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In one sentence you have expressed your love for your partner in, "Cherishing our golden days together."
This gives me a warm. fuzzy feeling of everlasting love! Well done.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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Thanks Wendyanne.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful entry for the 1 Line only poem contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the awesome art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
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This is a very beautiful entry for the 1 Line only poem contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the awesome art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Teri.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from RodG
A lovely sentiment and artwork combo. Few couples these days get to their "golden days together." Those who do, do indeed cherish them. Good luck in this contest. Rod
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
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A lovely sentiment and artwork combo. Few couples these days get to their "golden days together." Those who do, do indeed cherish them. Good luck in this contest. Rod
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Rod.
