Sewer Life
Monsters are real and grow in darkness.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Michelle,
This is a well rhymed and metered poem that seems to be about the fight between evil and good or the devil and Jesus/God.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Good luck in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.
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Hi Michelle,
This is a well rhymed and metered poem that seems to be about the fight between evil and good or the devil and Jesus/God.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Good luck in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very powerfully expressed verse about life in the sewer and you have created some very vivid images of this monster that thrives in darkness forbidding light to any vulnerable soul drawn to its clutches. I'm wondering if the monster represents the evil being perpetrated on the world via warfare, especially because many of the protagonists exist in underground cells of terror. A great entry for the contest and I wish you luck, Michelle! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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This is a very powerfully expressed verse about life in the sewer and you have created some very vivid images of this monster that thrives in darkness forbidding light to any vulnerable soul drawn to its clutches. I'm wondering if the monster represents the evil being perpetrated on the world via warfare, especially because many of the protagonists exist in underground cells of terror. A great entry for the contest and I wish you luck, Michelle! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Yes, it is exactly that. Thank you again for your understanding and review.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a very interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry written for the "A Monster" contest. It is vividly descriptive as in
" Each sadistic ugly beetle,
wears the death mask of a monster."
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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This is a very interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry written for the "A Monster" contest. It is vividly descriptive as in
" Each sadistic ugly beetle,
wears the death mask of a monster."
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Sorry that I didn't send this sooner. Thank you for the stars and review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is nicely executed, and you used the writing prompt well. The writing has an excellent flow from beginning to end. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Your poem is nicely executed, and you used the writing prompt well. The writing has an excellent flow from beginning to end. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2023
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Thank you for your review. Especially the comment on flow. That seems the hardest for me.