Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent poem full of sensory descriptions and colorful . Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
I?m so sorry it took me so long to reply. The depression was crippling for a bit. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate the feedback and I?m glad it hit how it was intended. I am very grateful for your time and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your well chosen words and your apprehension and melancholy at the arrival of Autumn here, I feel the same way. The preparation for winter is a sad time of year, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
I?m so sorry it took me so long to reply. The depression was crippling for a bit. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate the feedback and I?m glad it hit how it was intended. I am very grateful for your time and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.