2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Did the Blue Bird Tell?"-
6 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like the nod to the saying "a little bird told me ...". This was a happy, intimate and playful moment between two lovers who need no music to dance. Dance of souls. Beautiful and soothing
Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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I like the nod to the saying "a little bird told me ...". This was a happy, intimate and playful moment between two lovers who need no music to dance. Dance of souls. Beautiful and soothing
Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww a sweet tanka with a hidden hope of love...
great imagery and smooth flow
i liked the "tangled in dreams dancing all night to the beats of our hearts"
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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aww a sweet tanka with a hidden hope of love...
great imagery and smooth flow
i liked the "tangled in dreams dancing all night to the beats of our hearts"
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Shelley. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
That little blue bird was so happy to see you dancing with your loved one in your dreams that he couldn't wait to share it with the world. What a happy thought. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Thank you.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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That little blue bird was so happy to see you dancing with your loved one in your dreams that he couldn't wait to share it with the world. What a happy thought. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Thank you.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. The artwork you chose was amazing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. The artwork you chose was amazing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome my friend! I hope all is going well with your son! love and blessings, teri
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Thank you, Teri, he is doing better.
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I am so happy to hear that dear friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Is there a special meaning to the bluebird? I have heard the expression of the "blue bird of happiness." Maybe the happy memories were triggered by the bluebird.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Is there a special meaning to the bluebird? I have heard the expression of the "blue bird of happiness." Maybe the happy memories were triggered by the bluebird.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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No, it's just a blue bird..
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent writing. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. The emotion in your words is authentic.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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This is excellent writing. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. The emotion in your words is authentic.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs