Rose colored glasses
Try to face facts3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A really quite profound 5-7-9 verse enhanced by an image suggesting that we shouldn't be lured into seeing things as we would like to see them but, instead, see the reality of what lies beyond. Excellently done. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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A really quite profound 5-7-9 verse enhanced by an image suggesting that we shouldn't be lured into seeing things as we would like to see them but, instead, see the reality of what lies beyond. Excellently done. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Thanks Debbie.
Comment from Mrs W
Very good advice in the 5/7/9 style of poetry! Reality hits hard when we wear those 'rose tinted glasses'! Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Very good advice in the 5/7/9 style of poetry! Reality hits hard when we wear those 'rose tinted glasses'! Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Many thanks
Comment from Nicki Nance
The message is profound. 'as they are' is usually someplace between your reality and mine. Your presentation is gorgeous! Thank you for being the poetic voice of reason.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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The message is profound. 'as they are' is usually someplace between your reality and mine. Your presentation is gorgeous! Thank you for being the poetic voice of reason.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thanks Nicki.
