Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Fabulous ...wonderful poem... So well written... so clear... Loved it...
I can see why you got first place for this short poem dearest Debi....
Lisa, now reviewing like crazy...

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023

Thanks Lisa for reviewing and commenting on my silly poetry abuse poem. It was actually harder trying to make mistakes. Lol. Thanks again.

Comment from Aiona

Excellent

Heh! I love poems that rhyme and make me giggle. This one fits the bill. I like how you incorporated the mistakes into the poetry as a demonstration. It's very poetic!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023

Hi Aiona, I truly appreciate all the kind words for my silly poem..
It is fun to do fun and crazy sometimes! Lol.
Thanks again, my awesome friend.
Debi

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

You made me smile. Congratulations on the your win. I loved your many intentional mistakes. I think my poetry has been in a drought lately, too.
I hope you have a happy day!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023

Oh this is done? I thought it was a couple more days. Lol, I havent' even looked at my pm's so I just got here. I am pasting your poem in my Treasures Folder so that I can always look at it to make me smile.
Thank you for your kind comments and I am so happy everyone seemed to like this silly one. Lol, it was actually hard to allow myself to make those mistakes, especially the meter being so bad. LOL..thanks again for yesterday too. You were part of the reason it was the best birthday ever!
Love you with all my heart!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and very well written rhyming poem with great humor in your spelling! The artwork and your words go great with this contest entry. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Ter, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely bad. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.


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reply by Teri7 on 19-Oct-2023

You are so welcome! You did a great job on this!!!😊💕❤️

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

File a motion, call the police, send out a all points bulletin. Then be prepared to be embarrassed when your muse returns and wonders what all the fuss was about. Please do remember, most of us here on FanStory suffer an occasional bout of abuse by our muse. The great news is you will survive it. Take a vacation while the muse is gone and work him/her hard when he/she returns. Revenge is sweet.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Lol, Nomi you are so funny! Actually all was working too well or I wouldn't have been able to pull this off so well. So I love tho that everyone can relate and has those days. Thanks my dear friend for your fun comments!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It's a terrible thing when one's muse goes walkabout, and one can't think of a suitable rhyming word, and then, of course, one's ability to spell has likewise gone missing, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023

Hahaha! I hope I was that convincing Roy, because it was a little bit hard to not correct my own mistakes, so I could see why others were tempted. I think the hardest for me was coming up with a line where the meter would be so far off. Thanks for the awesome review and comments about my fun and terribly written poem, dear friend.

reply by royowen on 19-Oct-2023

Most welcome

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

This is hilarious and would win a contest if it were about making mistakes in meter, etc. Great humor here. It made me chuckle more than once. The presentation is delightful too with that confused comic image!

It actual has a good beat in spite of intentional flaws...overall.

I'm not sure if the contest judges will accept the intention since the prompt does not require it, but readers like me will certainly feel entertained.


Warmly,
rd

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Rama, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

reply by rama devi on 19-Oct-2023

:-)))

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is so clever. I wish I had thought of it, but I think my muse is also on vacation. Most of my poetry writing problems come from meter and rhythm. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Sharon, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

It was a fun read and I must confessI don't have much knowledge of meter or rhyme, though I enjoy reading rhymed poems.all the best for the contest..

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

Hi Santha, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

I love your sense of humor and how you incorporated it so successfully into this poem about poems. Each of us has felt this way, more than once, but we keep on, putting pen to paper and that is what makes us succeed in the end. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023

HiGinda, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend. '