Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Chapter 20 A"Can faith guide our path?
34 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I'm a bit behind so catching up.
This chapter left me biting my nails. Poor Molly and all her human and canine family and friends.
Emma has plenty of support, but it's still hard to see a loved one hurt. Worrying about Molly on top of all the other things that have happened. The poor girl needs a break.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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I'm a bit behind so catching up.
This chapter left me biting my nails. Poor Molly and all her human and canine family and friends.
Emma has plenty of support, but it's still hard to see a loved one hurt. Worrying about Molly on top of all the other things that have happened. The poor girl needs a break.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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As you already know Molly is okay. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is well done and proves that Emma has a whole flock of men who are her heroes. Unfortunately, at least one man is her enemy. I saw only one little problem . . . as the Doctor's word(s) rang . . .
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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This is well done and proves that Emma has a whole flock of men who are her heroes. Unfortunately, at least one man is her enemy. I saw only one little problem . . . as the Doctor's word(s) rang . . .
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I've made the correction. I appreciate the help.
Comment from lyenochka
Sometimes it takes a crisis to get people to see a relationship situation more clearly and it seems like the way Seth has handled this intruder problem and Molly's clinging for life to help Emma see that Seth is more than a friend. Everyone keeps telling her. Lol.
Great job and glad to see a prayer in the book.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Sometimes it takes a crisis to get people to see a relationship situation more clearly and it seems like the way Seth has handled this intruder problem and Molly's clinging for life to help Emma see that Seth is more than a friend. Everyone keeps telling her. Lol.
Great job and glad to see a prayer in the book.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendyanne
Poor dog!! You have written this chapter very well and I can sense the feelings felt by your characters. Your faith in God also shines through in this story.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Poor dog!! You have written this chapter very well and I can sense the feelings felt by your characters. Your faith in God also shines through in this story.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Another lovely chapter. Poor little Molly. I wonder what kind of wild dog bit her. Emma has had her share of misfortune lately. It's good to know Seth is helping her. I'm happy she has a good support system.
Wonderful addition to your book.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Another lovely chapter. Poor little Molly. I wonder what kind of wild dog bit her. Emma has had her share of misfortune lately. It's good to know Seth is helping her. I'm happy she has a good support system.
Wonderful addition to your book.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
No need for correction. I think what you've written here now definitely conveys her thoughts and her worries for paying her bills worry for the dog. The money she doesn't have. She comes through very clear.
I had no issue to tell following along in this story. I found it engaging interesting and had a cool storyline. I've seen parts of this before too and have followed long quite happily.
I see no issues grammatically or esthetically. I find you are layout to be quite good. You're a sentence structure punctuation subject matters all quite good. It's a good submission and I wish you best of luck!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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No need for correction. I think what you've written here now definitely conveys her thoughts and her worries for paying her bills worry for the dog. The money she doesn't have. She comes through very clear.
I had no issue to tell following along in this story. I found it engaging interesting and had a cool storyline. I've seen parts of this before too and have followed long quite happily.
I see no issues grammatically or esthetically. I find you are layout to be quite good. You're a sentence structure punctuation subject matters all quite good. It's a good submission and I wish you best of luck!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
When I saw the image, I was wondering what the chapter was going to be about. That is a mean looking creature. You did a great job with the chapter, as well as building the suspense regarding who is after Emma. It is a shame the screen was cut and Molly got out, but it could have been much worse.
Emma is a combination of being strong, yet still vulnerable. She didn't shy away when Molly had to go to the vet or when she needed someone to lean on. She has a strong faith, but has a ways to go when it comes to what she earns and how she is going to continue to manage living on her own with her financial situation.
I like the ending with the conversations with Jake and then Emma's father. I added a tender moment to the story. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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When I saw the image, I was wondering what the chapter was going to be about. That is a mean looking creature. You did a great job with the chapter, as well as building the suspense regarding who is after Emma. It is a shame the screen was cut and Molly got out, but it could have been much worse.
Emma is a combination of being strong, yet still vulnerable. She didn't shy away when Molly had to go to the vet or when she needed someone to lean on. She has a strong faith, but has a ways to go when it comes to what she earns and how she is going to continue to manage living on her own with her financial situation.
I like the ending with the conversations with Jake and then Emma's father. I added a tender moment to the story. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you for this kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
If Seth saw the coyote attack the dog, clear enough to shoot at the animal, why is he calling for the crime scene unit? (This answered later in the chapter.)
"Seth and I've known each over seven years" should probably be each other seven years.
Seems romance budding in the air.
Good thing Seth is taking precautionary measures.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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If Seth saw the coyote attack the dog, clear enough to shoot at the animal, why is he calling for the crime scene unit? (This answered later in the chapter.)
"Seth and I've known each over seven years" should probably be each other seven years.
Seems romance budding in the air.
Good thing Seth is taking precautionary measures.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this helpful review. I have made the correction. I always appreciate help.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
the first half of your story held more interest for me than the latter part in all honesty. I found myself getting anxious as the dogs were involved with the coyote, and then worried about Molly. It made me wonder- dogs don't have blood transfusions do they? I guess an IV with saline would have to be sufficient. In any event, I enjoyed your story. The story line is believable and the dialogue is good. Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Hello Barbara,
the first half of your story held more interest for me than the latter part in all honesty. I found myself getting anxious as the dogs were involved with the coyote, and then worried about Molly. It made me wonder- dogs don't have blood transfusions do they? I guess an IV with saline would have to be sufficient. In any event, I enjoyed your story. The story line is believable and the dialogue is good. Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Yes, dogs can have blood transfusions, but Molly had antibiotics and saline. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Yes, I know what it's like to have daughters, and think sometimes there's no one good enough for them, but God has a way of caring for our children more than we do, and can watch over them 24/7, we have a Moodle dog, who bosses his large Rottweiler 'niece' around, she adores him, she weighs 45kg, and he's a little over 5kg. Beautifully wrutten Barbara, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Yes, I know what it's like to have daughters, and think sometimes there's no one good enough for them, but God has a way of caring for our children more than we do, and can watch over them 24/7, we have a Moodle dog, who bosses his large Rottweiler 'niece' around, she adores him, she weighs 45kg, and he's a little over 5kg. Beautifully wrutten Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : Ace has a nasty (but's) but is?
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you for pointing that area out. I fixed it. I appreciate the help.
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Well done
