Memory Lane
Poetry2 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This poem offers a very good message. The picture is apt for the meaning of the piece.
If I may suggest, you change the color of the background to a lighter color so that this is easier to read. The words are almost indistinguishable from the background.
Otherwise, I love the message and yes, we need to look at our memories to learn from our mistakes.
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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This poem offers a very good message. The picture is apt for the meaning of the piece.
If I may suggest, you change the color of the background to a lighter color so that this is easier to read. The words are almost indistinguishable from the background.
Otherwise, I love the message and yes, we need to look at our memories to learn from our mistakes.
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Jesse-thank you. I appreciate your input on the color issue and am happy you liked the message. Diana
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I hope you consider my suggestion.
Jesse
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a lovely verse meandering down the page like a footpath or, of course, a lane! I like the way your free rhyming verse explores your past and enjoys the part it played in the person you've now become. We should, indeed, not be afraid to go back there and, in the process, learn from our experience. Thanks for sharing, Diana. Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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What a lovely verse meandering down the page like a footpath or, of course, a lane! I like the way your free rhyming verse explores your past and enjoys the part it played in the person you've now become. We should, indeed, not be afraid to go back there and, in the process, learn from our experience. Thanks for sharing, Diana. Debbie
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Debbie-thank you for your input and review. I appreciate you. Diana
