2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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8 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, though with a message of horror, as the witch takes young years and makes them her own, Halloween is certainly bringing out the scary in FS. writers, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Excellent, though with a message of horror, as the witch takes young years and makes them her own, Halloween is certainly bringing out the scary in FS. writers, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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.I appreciate your excellent review and helpful feedback. (*÷*) may you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
this was a cool tanka for halloween
great imagery of a sunset fire and witch's cauldron with a special brew brewing... and a smooth stirring of words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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this was a cool tanka for halloween
great imagery of a sunset fire and witch's cauldron with a special brew brewing... and a smooth stirring of words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I find the best recipe is thinly slice them and leave them to marinade in a fine red wine glaze; mmm, tasty. It's taken many a Halloween to perfect my recipe, but...!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I find the best recipe is thinly slice them and leave them to marinade in a fine red wine glaze; mmm, tasty. It's taken many a Halloween to perfect my recipe, but...!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
How on God's green earth did you find that artwork to go with this poem? WOW!! It's perfect. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. Once again, you're the reigning queen of poetry.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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How on God's green earth did you find that artwork to go with this poem? WOW!! It's perfect. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. Once again, you're the reigning queen of poetry.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Hola Marival, I loved this Halloween Tanka. It just flows so effortlessly and sets the sentiments of the time.
I've learned that your son he has been unwell, but I also understand he's better now. Estas in mis pensamientos. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Hola Marival, I loved this Halloween Tanka. It just flows so effortlessly and sets the sentiments of the time.
I've learned that your son he has been unwell, but I also understand he's better now. Estas in mis pensamientos. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Gracias, Ulla. my sun suffers of congestive heart failure and was in the hospital for a week running tests and procedures. He didn't have a heart attack and no obstraction in his coronary veins. He is home now and feeling better. Now he has to follow regular health measures ... diet, exercise, etc... Thank you for the excellent review. Happy weekend!
abrazos
marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
Of course, you know I love this. I do love a naughty witch. They should frighten us. It's what they do. This was so fun. Great poem and keep on keeping on with the Halloween poetry. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Of course, you know I love this. I do love a naughty witch. They should frighten us. It's what they do. This was so fun. Great poem and keep on keeping on with the Halloween poetry. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Gretchen (*<>*) it means a lot to me.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from gramalot8
Very good Tanka that tells the tale of a classic witchy situation. Many a nightmare has been based upon the premise of witches eating her prey. Thanks for sharing your Halloween horror with us.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Very good Tanka that tells the tale of a classic witchy situation. Many a nightmare has been based upon the premise of witches eating her prey. Thanks for sharing your Halloween horror with us.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words
Have a great weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Well, part of Trick or Treat is the trick after all. So why shouldn't those nasty little pumpkin-smashers expect a little something in return for their efforts? Bwahaha! A marvelous poem. Made at least one eyebrow go up.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Well, part of Trick or Treat is the trick after all. So why shouldn't those nasty little pumpkin-smashers expect a little something in return for their efforts? Bwahaha! A marvelous poem. Made at least one eyebrow go up.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words
Have a great weekend!
Gypsy hugs