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My inheritance

Following in MotherĂ¢??s footsteps

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Comment from pome lover
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That's pretty funny. You kept the reader wondering what business she couldn't keep going until the very end, and then -- oops! surprise! Cute story.
Katharine

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
    Thanks Katherine.
Comment from gramalot8
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Lol ... ha ha ha. I loved it! I was wondering the whole time what kind of business your Mom left that you we're failing so badly to continue!
Guess your Mom wasn't explicit enough in teaching you all the ins and outs of the job! Great humor. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much
Comment from BenThrone
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Well, you know what they say about best laid plans. It would be a shame to see such a fine mom-and-pop business go down.

I could go on but probably shouldn't lol. This actually made me chuckle which is more than I can say for any of the other entries I've read for this contest.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thanks Ben. So glad you like my humor.