Ghost
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Because of your detailed telling of your story, I can easily understand your pain and almost feel some of it. Many of us never feel as alone as you were, and rarely had to experience real hunger. I'm glad you had two friends who felt willing to help. Hopefully you can survive without too much agony, until their return.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Because of your detailed telling of your story, I can easily understand your pain and almost feel some of it. Many of us never feel as alone as you were, and rarely had to experience real hunger. I'm glad you had two friends who felt willing to help. Hopefully you can survive without too much agony, until their return.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Hi, thank you yeah, I did make it through although or didn't stay much past early fall. Yes, I knew I couldn't survive through the winter. They were great friends they helped me when I needed it smell. Thank you for stopping and reading. Offering your kind thoughts and your compassion. The support I received from you and others is very very precious to me. Something I've rarely had in my life. It is a gift, a true gift. Thank you again!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
Of course you took a chance telling your friends what was happening to you. I think the natural reaction is one that your angry friend took. I can't stand it when people are mistreated and bullied. You were left with so little to go out into the world with. I know what it's like to go hungry. Though we had food on the farm, it never seemed to be enough, and if it was, you didn't want to eat it anyway. We were always hungry, at least for the first five or so years. Whenever the opportunity arose to go to town, I'd go. The other members who were fortunate enough to make the trip always hit all three stores. We filled up on junk food until we either ran out of money or were on the verge of getting sick. In some ways I can relate to your story. You still had a lot to overcome though, especially as a young lady. I don't know where the story ends, but I'd be afraid that you could have been raped or killed living by yourself. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Hello Lea,
Of course you took a chance telling your friends what was happening to you. I think the natural reaction is one that your angry friend took. I can't stand it when people are mistreated and bullied. You were left with so little to go out into the world with. I know what it's like to go hungry. Though we had food on the farm, it never seemed to be enough, and if it was, you didn't want to eat it anyway. We were always hungry, at least for the first five or so years. Whenever the opportunity arose to go to town, I'd go. The other members who were fortunate enough to make the trip always hit all three stores. We filled up on junk food until we either ran out of money or were on the verge of getting sick. In some ways I can relate to your story. You still had a lot to overcome though, especially as a young lady. I don't know where the story ends, but I'd be afraid that you could have been raped or killed living by yourself. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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I'm so sorry Tom that you had to go through that. If anyone understands the pain and deep betrayal of it all, it is me. And trust one's taken away it's very difficult to get back it's not impossible. I'm truly taken by this review, give me a warm smile and a Good Night's rest for which I am really happy about. Cause it won't get many of those anymore. Thank you my friend have a good rest tonight we'll talk to you soon!
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Hello Lea,
as I'm sure you know, or are in the process of finding out, it's the valleys that we go through that make us stronger. While I wouldn't want to endure those early days of farm life again, in retrospect, I think I learned a lot. I wrote my first book about my time there and it opened the door to write a few more. I wish I knew what to write about now, I'd write another one. The picture I saw of you shows a person who has been hurt, and I know it's hard to ever trust anyone again, but I hope you've come to realize that as bad as the world can be, there are still lights shining brightly who do care and are willing to help to heal the sorrow that you've endured. Please do stay in touch. I'd like to see how you've progressed.
Blessings,
Tom
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Absolutely Tom, I'll be writing for a while too. we will definitely stay in touch before during and after! Im beginning to realize that not everyone needs to be held under the microscope learned behavior can sometimes be tough to overcome however! I am well on the way thx!!
Comment from damommy
I have to ask why you didn't go to the police, or tell a teacher, or something. Those people would have been put away and you'd have found a better family to life with. I can't imagine going through this, but you were certainly and resourceful.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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I have to ask why you didn't go to the police, or tell a teacher, or something. Those people would have been put away and you'd have found a better family to life with. I can't imagine going through this, but you were certainly and resourceful.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Hi, for those answers, you will need to refer to my auto bio located in my portfolio a book called "Ghost" Feel free to read if your wish. This chapter you have just reviewed it's number 15. Thank you so much for reading I appreciate your time your comment in your review. Have a great evening!
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad these friend are willing to help. I'm sorry you have to steal food and risk getting cought. It is interesting that both of your friend were guys. They are probably less likely to tell anyone that girls would be. I guess you need who you could most likely trust. I anxious to read more.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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I'm glad these friend are willing to help. I'm sorry you have to steal food and risk getting cought. It is interesting that both of your friend were guys. They are probably less likely to tell anyone that girls would be. I guess you need who you could most likely trust. I anxious to read more.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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For me, I distrusted women more than I distrusted men. Although men can be obvious. At least it's in your face, and you don't have to guess. My distrust in women comes solely from my mother's manipulation. Refusal to help us and instantly threw us to the wolves without even a look backwards. My stepfather hurt me, my mother anandoned me. Yin and yang. Matthew produced a quality review, asked pertinent question and give advice that's of well rounded review and I appreciate you and your journey alone with me which I can't stop saying really hope you have an awesome night!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This was a serious relief. At LAST, not just one, but TWO allies! And they're returning with munitions! Still, though, so many days away. The Jewish Mommie in me just wants to bring you to my house, feed you, protect you and give you a really nice life. Oy. This is such a heart-wrenching tale...yet, not in any way "pathetic" because you are so freakin FIERCE...and CAPABLE!! You remind me of the meme that reads: You don't know how strong you are until being strong is your only choice. It honestly was your salvation. You'd have died if you'd remained with the man. But you were WORLDS stronger than him. xo
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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This was a serious relief. At LAST, not just one, but TWO allies! And they're returning with munitions! Still, though, so many days away. The Jewish Mommie in me just wants to bring you to my house, feed you, protect you and give you a really nice life. Oy. This is such a heart-wrenching tale...yet, not in any way "pathetic" because you are so freakin FIERCE...and CAPABLE!! You remind me of the meme that reads: You don't know how strong you are until being strong is your only choice. It honestly was your salvation. You'd have died if you'd remained with the man. But you were WORLDS stronger than him. xo
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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You know how to prop me up it's a fact. You are very complimentary. I'm not sure that I completely deserve it. But I'll take it and be happy for it.
The most amazing review thank you so very much always happy to have you my friend along this journey. I hope you rest well, we'll talk again very soon, thanks again!
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You deserve every word. The truth will set you free. xoxox
Comment from Jim Wile
I love how you've written this, Lea, by giving your feelings about things today against the background of what took place in the past. This truly seems like a catharsis for you, which is sorely overdue.
I hope your friends came through for you and brought you the things you needed to survive. It will be interesting to see how long you were able to live like this and if you ever ended up having to go back to your former "life." I sincerely hope not. - Jim
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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I love how you've written this, Lea, by giving your feelings about things today against the background of what took place in the past. This truly seems like a catharsis for you, which is sorely overdue.
I hope your friends came through for you and brought you the things you needed to survive. It will be interesting to see how long you were able to live like this and if you ever ended up having to go back to your former "life." I sincerely hope not. - Jim
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Jim thank you for your kind compliments and compassion And for the time you take to read them. Always a plus always gold and I can't stop saying that.
All answers will come more shocking than you know. Thank you always and today have a great night!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a good job you had some friend who were on the look out for you and it was probably wise not to confront your Stepfather as he would have made life even worse for you. Where are social services when a child needs them most? A well written story as you continue telling us about the horrors of your childhood Lea, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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It is a good job you had some friend who were on the look out for you and it was probably wise not to confront your Stepfather as he would have made life even worse for you. Where are social services when a child needs them most? A well written story as you continue telling us about the horrors of your childhood Lea, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Hi, Dolly, there is a so much deeper issue here. My family is high up with social services here in Canada. Policy makers that cover things up.
I will get to that certainly you will be appalled as I am. Thank you then Dolly for reading along offering your kind comment of which I'm always appreciative. I hope your day is grand!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another great write with this sharing of trauma, in itself the start of therapy but this intervention has to be confidential if it's going to be effective. Hopefully, these friends can be trusted. Their input here powerfully voices the anger and frustration of the reader as the sensitive and precarious nature of the writer's situation is recalled. Well done, Lea! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Another great write with this sharing of trauma, in itself the start of therapy but this intervention has to be confidential if it's going to be effective. Hopefully, these friends can be trusted. Their input here powerfully voices the anger and frustration of the reader as the sensitive and precarious nature of the writer's situation is recalled. Well done, Lea! Debbie
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Debbie you really do rock i must say! No words express how truly happy I am you are along for the ride! You always know exactly what i'm trying to say how I'm saying and why. A true gift! I appreciate your kind review as always and happy to see your name come up. I hope you got a great day planned. Cause you deserve it, have a great night!
Comment from JSD
Another excellent instalment. I am so impressed with the way you use your poetic skills to take us deep into your heart and your mind. This is compelling writing. Your fears about the reactions of your friends ring so true and then we share your relief at being believed. All so gorgeous to read. x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Another excellent instalment. I am so impressed with the way you use your poetic skills to take us deep into your heart and your mind. This is compelling writing. Your fears about the reactions of your friends ring so true and then we share your relief at being believed. All so gorgeous to read. x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you, John, for your final review for your support. I can't stop saying that. Yeah, but you hang it on and it's funny with me. And hes a lot appreciate you and your review and all that you have to say. Have an awesome evening!
Comment from JT traveller
I hear you! Your passion and pain are palpable. I can sense you healing and see your strength in your words. Another powerful write. Well done. Let it out so it doesn't eat you up inside. Take care, Jacqueline
P.S. One question, "What is a ding dong?"
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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I hear you! Your passion and pain are palpable. I can sense you healing and see your strength in your words. Another powerful write. Well done. Let it out so it doesn't eat you up inside. Take care, Jacqueline
P.S. One question, "What is a ding dong?"
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Hi Jacqueline, a Ding-Dong is a small round layer cake with white icing in the middle and then coated in chocolate.
I will say again how much I appreciate you reading and hanging in there with me. I've been alone so much, it was almost weird to realize that I'm not. You're part of that, thank you very much. It's gold! And I thank you for hope you have a great evening!
