Guided by Faith
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
What a fine submission this is and a great chapter too. Its Clear and concise, I also think that your characters are vibrant. They got some meat to them, and they're believable in their dialogue and their action. That to me makes a great story. Great notes, too, gives us an understanding of who. What and where if you're coming in Reading from the middle.
Having said that, I see no issues with grammar, sentence structure, spelling subject matter. Well put together, obviously, we'll find out by a talented writer. Thank you for this, I'll be looking for the next one. Have a great night!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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What a fine submission this is and a great chapter too. Its Clear and concise, I also think that your characters are vibrant. They got some meat to them, and they're believable in their dialogue and their action. That to me makes a great story. Great notes, too, gives us an understanding of who. What and where if you're coming in Reading from the middle.
Having said that, I see no issues with grammar, sentence structure, spelling subject matter. Well put together, obviously, we'll find out by a talented writer. Thank you for this, I'll be looking for the next one. Have a great night!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, there will be gossip all over town after that public peck on the cheek. You still keep us on the alert wondering who is lurking around Emma's house. There are several possibilities. Once we know the motive, we can narrow it down, but Seth might have to catch them first. Or, maybe Ace will.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Oh, there will be gossip all over town after that public peck on the cheek. You still keep us on the alert wondering who is lurking around Emma's house. There are several possibilities. Once we know the motive, we can narrow it down, but Seth might have to catch them first. Or, maybe Ace will.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Some information will be coming Sunday and the next few weeks.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You're allowing us access to Seth and Emma's inner thoughts a little more in this chapter. I like that.
As you know, I like dialogue - it tells us what people are thinking and keeps the pace of the story going. This was another good example of that.
Of course, we know who's lurking about the neighborhood. But Seth will take care of that. (Or maybe I don't know - maybe it's actually Peggy!)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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You're allowing us access to Seth and Emma's inner thoughts a little more in this chapter. I like that.
As you know, I like dialogue - it tells us what people are thinking and keeps the pace of the story going. This was another good example of that.
Of course, we know who's lurking about the neighborhood. But Seth will take care of that. (Or maybe I don't know - maybe it's actually Peggy!)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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We'll see exactly what's going on very soon. I'm not exactly sure without checking what chapter, but I know it's soon. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Yay! Seth kissed Emma! Even if it was only for show to keep Ronnie away, it was their first and it will probably work! Now we have to wonder who it was that was wandering around Emma's place that night! Great job with showing us the increasing romance and the open communication.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Yay! Seth kissed Emma! Even if it was only for show to keep Ronnie away, it was their first and it will probably work! Now we have to wonder who it was that was wandering around Emma's place that night! Great job with showing us the increasing romance and the open communication.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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We'll find out something Sunday. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Ronnie is going to be a pain, and he seems like one of those people who are controlling and won't accept "No" for an answer - in fact quite like Peggy Barton. Can you organise a match between those two? Interesting and positive development for Seth and Emma.
Wendy
Edit: Ronni walked up to Seth and offered his hand. (Ronnie)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Ronnie is going to be a pain, and he seems like one of those people who are controlling and won't accept "No" for an answer - in fact quite like Peggy Barton. Can you organise a match between those two? Interesting and positive development for Seth and Emma.
Wendy
Edit: Ronni walked up to Seth and offered his hand. (Ronnie)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I appreciate the help. I think Peggy and Ronnie might already know each other. LOL I appreciate the review.
Comment from jmdg1954
I found this to be a well written chapter, especially when Molly was bouncing around barking at something. Hopefully we will find out what in a next chapter or two.
Seems, the relationship is maturing a bit on Emma's part.
Good chapter...
Cheers.
John
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I found this to be a well written chapter, especially when Molly was bouncing around barking at something. Hopefully we will find out what in a next chapter or two.
Seems, the relationship is maturing a bit on Emma's part.
Good chapter...
Cheers.
John
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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You will find out Sunday what Molly is upset over. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Another wonderful chapter, Barbara. I'm so happy Seth and Emma seem to be getting closer. I can't wait for their first kiss. I wonder why Emma and Seth dogs were acting weird.... like someone was around.
Well done. I love your book.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Another wonderful chapter, Barbara. I'm so happy Seth and Emma seem to be getting closer. I can't wait for their first kiss. I wonder why Emma and Seth dogs were acting weird.... like someone was around.
Well done. I love your book.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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We'll know Sunday what the dogs are upset over. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ok. I see Seth is showing more interest in Emma. I see some trouble coming from the over confident Calhoun. He seems like the kind of guy who would never believe his charms could be resisted. Great chapter, thoroughly enjoyed. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Ok. I see Seth is showing more interest in Emma. I see some trouble coming from the over confident Calhoun. He seems like the kind of guy who would never believe his charms could be resisted. Great chapter, thoroughly enjoyed. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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You have Ronnie pegged perfectly thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
I do wonder if Peggy and Ronald are related, or there's just a shortage of dating available people. When Ace was pacing, my first thought was, open the door and let him out, but Molly wasn't let out, so I thought no one will be caught tonight. Meaning: I would think about how often you tease with this stalking.
Well written chapter.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I do wonder if Peggy and Ronald are related, or there's just a shortage of dating available people. When Ace was pacing, my first thought was, open the door and let him out, but Molly wasn't let out, so I thought no one will be caught tonight. Meaning: I would think about how often you tease with this stalking.
Well written chapter.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. We will find out Sunday what is going on.
Comment from Jay Squires
This was an excellent chapter, Barbara. Good tension was maintained throughout the period while they were trying to find out if someone was outside her house.
As they walked, Emma leaned her head against his arm. He glanced down. "Tired?" Leave it to Seth to take the magic out of it! LOL.
Jay
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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This was an excellent chapter, Barbara. Good tension was maintained throughout the period while they were trying to find out if someone was outside her house.
As they walked, Emma leaned her head against his arm. He glanced down. "Tired?" Leave it to Seth to take the magic out of it! LOL.
Jay
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Seth is afraid of this young'un'. She just might find a soft side to him. DARN!! I think she already has. Thank you for the kind review.
