Out Of Grasp
Are you ever too old to grow up ?2 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
Well that's a question for the ages, isn't it? If we knew the answer to that we might all try to be better people. But I guess in the end, trying is better than not trying. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Well that's a question for the ages, isn't it? If we knew the answer to that we might all try to be better people. But I guess in the end, trying is better than not trying. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Yes you are correct. If only we had long enough arms to give ourselves a pat on the back ha. Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from Eleri
I presume you mean 3.142 as Pi here. In which case it is closer to three than four but I do take your point. I would have made the last line read 'Never reaching four' as that goes better with the fifth line than your current one but apart from that this is a clever poem.
Eleri
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I presume you mean 3.142 as Pi here. In which case it is closer to three than four but I do take your point. I would have made the last line read 'Never reaching four' as that goes better with the fifth line than your current one but apart from that this is a clever poem.
Eleri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I meant that I am incapable to reach for / four, no matter how much I grow. As pi is always increasing, is it not. Thank you for your review. To be honest this poem needs to much explaining, to the point, I believe, makes it rubbish.
