Dreams Should Be Such As This
A true story7 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I swear I had already reviewed this. It is lovely and warm, blissful, sweet, tender, and chock full of love.
I imagine your momma now has a perfect voice to sing with. My momma also could not sing well. My daddy and me sang very loudly to drown out her and my sisters. Our church had no choirs and no instruments. Acapella only. They sang as loud as they wanted. It made them happy. Karen
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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I swear I had already reviewed this. It is lovely and warm, blissful, sweet, tender, and chock full of love.
I imagine your momma now has a perfect voice to sing with. My momma also could not sing well. My daddy and me sang very loudly to drown out her and my sisters. Our church had no choirs and no instruments. Acapella only. They sang as loud as they wanted. It made them happy. Karen
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
It's God's ears, not ours that matter.
Sometimes I have reviewed posts and forgot to hit the button at the bottom to save them. Very frustrating when I thought it was an exhaustive review.
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Thanks for the share.Have a good week.:-) Karen
Comment from Annmuma
What a powerful piece and excellent entry for the Dreaming contest. It is creative, imaginative and the emotions are palpable. Great job and I found no areas where improvement could be suggested. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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What a powerful piece and excellent entry for the Dreaming contest. It is creative, imaginative and the emotions are palpable. Great job and I found no areas where improvement could be suggested. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
I debated entering a contest based on such a real, meaningful event.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
First, I appreciate your entry. The first week sowed little interest and I wondered if I erred in creating this contest.
Note diabetid is in the last sentence of para three. Shouldn't that be as diabetic in the following paragraph?
I lived the nightmare with my mother-in-law. It's a diesease that needs addressing so others will be less apt to experience it.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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First, I appreciate your entry. The first week sowed little interest and I wondered if I erred in creating this contest.
Note diabetid is in the last sentence of para three. Shouldn't that be as diabetic in the following paragraph?
I lived the nightmare with my mother-in-law. It's a diesease that needs addressing so others will be less apt to experience it.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
I can' t believe that spelling got through. I feel like it was mysteriously changed on me. Hah!
Comment from Claire Tennant
What a sad but beautiful tale of struggle and faith, of determination and trust, of control and faith.. No, repetition here, I meant all that: A clear message of hope in Jesus, but the frailties of human nature are present. I shed a few tears, but what a blessing your mother was. I wish yo well in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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What a sad but beautiful tale of struggle and faith, of determination and trust, of control and faith.. No, repetition here, I meant all that: A clear message of hope in Jesus, but the frailties of human nature are present. I shed a few tears, but what a blessing your mother was. I wish yo well in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
A very moving story, and a well-written one. A dream of your mother in heaven, leading the choir, and with perfect harmony and joy, that is indeed a wonderful thing to envisage.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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A very moving story, and a well-written one. A dream of your mother in heaven, leading the choir, and with perfect harmony and joy, that is indeed a wonderful thing to envisage.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
I still see/hear it.
Comment from JSD
A moving and heart-warming piece on your mother. A tribute to her life and bravery. Well done on having the courage to write this; it must have been tough. And good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
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A moving and heart-warming piece on your mother. A tribute to her life and bravery. Well done on having the courage to write this; it must have been tough. And good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
I hope it helps someone with the decision whether to let a loved one go.
Comment from JPGeo
Your very well written and tender story has taken us from the very dark and evil illness of your mother to a place of song and beauty. Thank you for educating us a little on this devastating disease and for sharing your very personal story. Best wishes and
Peace,
John
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
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Your very well written and tender story has taken us from the very dark and evil illness of your mother to a place of song and beauty. Thank you for educating us a little on this devastating disease and for sharing your very personal story. Best wishes and
Peace,
John
Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
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Thank you.
The dream was a gift.
