Haiku(autumn scents linger)
Haiku Nature5 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Congrats of your winning Haiku entry Zanya!
Your overall presentation is a reason you reached the top rung.
As Fall approaches, one can just feel the chill in the air and smell the scents of fallen leaves. Do like your illustration and font style for your post.
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Congrats of your winning Haiku entry Zanya!
Your overall presentation is a reason you reached the top rung.
As Fall approaches, one can just feel the chill in the air and smell the scents of fallen leaves. Do like your illustration and font style for your post.
Mark
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thanks for a great review - glad you enjoyed it. zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Loved how you captured both the senses of smell (autumn's nocturnal bouquet) and the sensation of the chilly autumn air. Congratulations on the well deserved win!!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Loved how you captured both the senses of smell (autumn's nocturnal bouquet) and the sensation of the chilly autumn air. Congratulations on the well deserved win!!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Beautiful! At last a real haiku amongst the imposters who entered! Very well done, Mystery Poet. I hope you are able to make it to the winner's circle with this one. In my opinion, that's where it belongs. xo
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Beautiful! At last a real haiku amongst the imposters who entered! Very well done, Mystery Poet. I hope you are able to make it to the winner's circle with this one. In my opinion, that's where it belongs. xo
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Wow- much appreciated accolade. zanya
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Much appreciated haiku!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good haiku with a good topic.
-Vivid imagery paints a good word picture of the autumn scene.
-You capture the scents and the feeling of autumn.
-It is chilly at twilight and the scents of the season linger.
-A very good satori line with the double meaning of bouquet.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good haiku with a good topic.
-Vivid imagery paints a good word picture of the autumn scene.
-You capture the scents and the feeling of autumn.
-It is chilly at twilight and the scents of the season linger.
-A very good satori line with the double meaning of bouquet.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Great review zanya
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You are welcome!
Comment from w.j.debi
I love autumn with all the marvelous colors and scents. The slight chill in the air seems just right to enhance it all.
You captured the feeling well. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I love autumn with all the marvelous colors and scents. The slight chill in the air seems just right to enhance it all.
You captured the feeling well. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Great review zanya
