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Cold Wind of Winter

Having love in your heart.

8 total reviews 
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a beautifully written kyrielle poem. Love the repeated phrase for there is love within my heart. Photo is absolutely beautiful. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Joanne. :)
Comment from Andrea Kepple
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I love how you paired this poem with that picture. The picture of the tree covered in ice is a nice contrast with your poem. I found myself smiling as I read through your poem and feel happier after reading it.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Andrea. :) If I brought a smile to your heart, I am happy.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well written Kyrielle poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Teri. :) I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the Write a Kyrielle writing prompt contest.

Nice rhyming quatrains with repeating lines. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

The presentation is simple but nice.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Gypsy. :) I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from oliver818
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This is a beautiful kyrielle, I enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed the ending with the way you evoke love and the heart for just a moment- it's very touching. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Oliver. :) I'm glad my words moved you.
Comment from Sally Law
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Beautifully written and illustrated poem in this unique repeated form of poetry. A masterful write of winter's approach.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Sally. :) I try with my simple words to make you see. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Usually love in our heart brings warmth, but here our love has brought: (That ice-cold breath just numbs the pain), perhaps this is actually heartbreak? A deeply troubling encounter here, fine rhymes and flow, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Dolly, I'm like you. I write words that come from the heart. :)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge! You're focus is love in your heart and that is very powerful because Love truly Conquers All. You write great imagery which reaches the senses of a reader. Beautiful work!

Best wishes!

Alex ð???â??ï¸?

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Alexandra. :) I'm glad you liked it.