2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Mother Nature's Lullaby"-
8 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Your very nice presentation for that early morning feeling between lovers is formed in an elegant dance that many of us have experienced at LEAST once in our lives.
Your artwork just adds to the joy of reading your verse.
Mark
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Gypsy,
Your very nice presentation for that early morning feeling between lovers is formed in an elegant dance that many of us have experienced at LEAST once in our lives.
Your artwork just adds to the joy of reading your verse.
Mark
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
These are so beautiful and have such an intimate feel to them. It's like they are being whispered. Like I'm privy to something that doesn't include me, but I'm richer for witnessing it. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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These are so beautiful and have such an intimate feel to them. It's like they are being whispered. Like I'm privy to something that doesn't include me, but I'm richer for witnessing it. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
The pictures were delightful, Gypsy. Your words promised all of those things of your words that should come. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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The pictures were delightful, Gypsy. Your words promised all of those things of your words that should come. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this amazing presentation with us. Early mornings are my favorite time of day. You painted beautiful images with your words.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you for sharing this amazing presentation with us. Early mornings are my favorite time of day. You painted beautiful images with your words.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
just make sure you don't have a pee test after you eat a poppy seed muffin LOL! (sorry, love seinfeld lol)
anyway, beautiful gogyohka suite with great imagery and smooth flow and the sunset colours are a nice touch
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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just make sure you don't have a pee test after you eat a poppy seed muffin LOL! (sorry, love seinfeld lol)
anyway, beautiful gogyohka suite with great imagery and smooth flow and the sunset colours are a nice touch
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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I know, poppy seeds can show as an opioid in urine test. I love seinfeld.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Marival, this gogyohka poem is outstanding in its visual and sensual elements. The feeling evoked while reading this has such a timeless quality... just as it is floating in the middle of the air.
The use of nature throughout connected me to the pure beauty of your mind at work. I feel this poem holds personal memories for you. The last three lines cry it out to me, but I can't put my finger on its true meaning... all I do know to me, it seems to be a reference to someone of a motherly nature looking over you... okay, it's your mother, how many times did I look and read these words until that hit me.
I'm not sure of the poppies connection though... I know my when my mother was sick, morphine was the only salvation to her pain. I hope it wasn't the same for your mother.
A truly beautifully presented and composed poem that so deserves a golden star attached.
That first verse blew my mind... how stunning in the way it sits in one's mind and heart! That was pure magic!
With our thoughts we create...
an indelible connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Marival, this gogyohka poem is outstanding in its visual and sensual elements. The feeling evoked while reading this has such a timeless quality... just as it is floating in the middle of the air.
The use of nature throughout connected me to the pure beauty of your mind at work. I feel this poem holds personal memories for you. The last three lines cry it out to me, but I can't put my finger on its true meaning... all I do know to me, it seems to be a reference to someone of a motherly nature looking over you... okay, it's your mother, how many times did I look and read these words until that hit me.
I'm not sure of the poppies connection though... I know my when my mother was sick, morphine was the only salvation to her pain. I hope it wasn't the same for your mother.
A truly beautifully presented and composed poem that so deserves a golden star attached.
That first verse blew my mind... how stunning in the way it sits in one's mind and heart! That was pure magic!
With our thoughts we create...
an indelible connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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It's not about my mother. I wrote it for a friend that loves nature and he is going through a tough time. I know he will be okay. He is very strong.
I guess it's about the nurtured in me.
I will take a look at the last gogyohka. My intention was to recommend taking time to rest.
Yesterday wasn't my best poem writing day. I had therapy and it always leaves me rattled.
Thank you, James. I don't need a six, your review is a always a treat.
Marival
friendship grows
rampant in my garden
I cut a bouquet for you
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Well, the ego in me recognised a want in a connection, one can never assume when the craft you present has connection to every reader... it's your personal style.
Your colour bomb, well color Bomb Gogyohka is powerfully candid and hits the reader in knowing of the journey taken to construct these words and thoughts.
To say it wasn't one of your best poem writing days... well, I'll stay and watch out for when you have a good day, because I thought both poems are outstanding with a capital 'O'.
Love the quote!
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Thank you, James, you are very kind.
Some days I'm in the zoneand I write one or two good ones, and others days I'm distracted by my grandson or life stuff and I don't feel the fairy dust. LoL (laughing out loud)
Comment from JT traveller
Another outstanding, beautifully crafted and presented poem.
You never cease to amaze and a inspire me, Gypsy.
Thank you for sharing your words, Jacqueline
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Another outstanding, beautifully crafted and presented poem.
You never cease to amaze and a inspire me, Gypsy.
Thank you for sharing your words, Jacqueline
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I thought of the poppy's opiate ability but I also remember how you gathered poppies for your mom when you were a child so naturally, you think of Mother Nature's lullaby with poppies and connections to your mom. Lovely!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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I thought of the poppy's opiate ability but I also remember how you gathered poppies for your mom when you were a child so naturally, you think of Mother Nature's lullaby with poppies and connections to your mom. Lovely!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you, big sister, you know me so well.
Love
Marival
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