Beware
Stay out of his way2 total reviews
Comment from Eleri
I sincerely hope not! This poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest but does come across as a bit threatening despite your clever reversal of the old adage 'his bark is worse than his bit'. Having said that I am sure that some people will find it amusing so good luck in the contest
Eleri
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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I sincerely hope not! This poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest but does come across as a bit threatening despite your clever reversal of the old adage 'his bark is worse than his bit'. Having said that I am sure that some people will find it amusing so good luck in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks for the revue. I don?t mean to offend dog lovers. Just a bit of fun.
Comment from JSD
Excellent. Nice twist on the traditional quotation. Certainly 'witty' and thus a great entry for the contest. Well done and good luck.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Excellent. Nice twist on the traditional quotation. Certainly 'witty' and thus a great entry for the contest. Well done and good luck.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks a lot John. I?m not happy with the picture. I tried to download a ferocious cartoon dog from the internet but computer said no. At least you got the joke. Many won?t. Take care.
