Penguin
Awww!3 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
This is a cute poem.
I like the reference to a suit in the poem since penguins are usually referred to as being in formal dress.
I like how you managed to get the rhymes into the poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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This is a cute poem.
I like the reference to a suit in the poem since penguins are usually referred to as being in formal dress.
I like how you managed to get the rhymes into the poem.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Eleri
I think that penguins almost look as though they are wearing suits already. This is certainly a cute animal 5-7-5 poem that has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest. I wish you all the best with it
Eleri
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I think that penguins almost look as though they are wearing suits already. This is certainly a cute animal 5-7-5 poem that has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest. I wish you all the best with it
Eleri
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review! They do look like they are wearing suits.
Kristen
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 5-7-5 you have penned for the contest. I love penguins. They are so cute and look like they could be tiny little butlers with their penguin suits on. Very good descriptive words. A picture would have been good too! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This is a very cute 5-7-5 you have penned for the contest. I love penguins. They are so cute and look like they could be tiny little butlers with their penguin suits on. Very good descriptive words. A picture would have been good too! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review and six star rating!