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Eloped

A night of tequila and a very bad decision! Oops!

2 total reviews 
Comment from Eleri
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I'm glad that in this country they will not marry you if one of you is obviously drunk. This is a good monostitch poem with an interesting subject - I just hope that it is not autobiographical.
Eleri

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
    HaHa Thank you, Eleri, Yes, all ficiton!
Comment from RodG
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This scenario does happen in Vegas (and Reno) more often than you would think. You might introduce a short story with this Monostich. Your ending sounds contrived because of your misuse of WED. Why not just say WEDDING?

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
    Thank you for reviewing.