Do Not Despair
All that Is Divine Essence is One.6 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is a beautiful poem expressing what many of us know to be true. The dearly departed remain in us too, as we are linked spiritually. The spirit is eternal.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your writing endeavors.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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This is a beautiful poem expressing what many of us know to be true. The dearly departed remain in us too, as we are linked spiritually. The spirit is eternal.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your writing endeavors.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 29-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reviewing this poem and for your blessings. Yes, the spirit is eternal; we are linked spiritually. Wishing you all the best and many blessings too! Cathy XOs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very thoughtful and thought-provoking verse which I enjoyed reading. Despite its succinctness it speaks wisely and compellingly of unity in the divine. It questions the whole notion of individuality and therefore suggests that death doesn't divide us for we are bonded in eternity. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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This is a very thoughtful and thought-provoking verse which I enjoyed reading. Despite its succinctness it speaks wisely and compellingly of unity in the divine. It questions the whole notion of individuality and therefore suggests that death doesn't divide us for we are bonded in eternity. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Hi Debbie. Thank you for your very detailed review. It means a lot to me what you have said here. You fully understand the meaning in my poem. Bless you! Cathy
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You're welcome and thank you so much for the vote!
Comment from Isabel Fontes
Your poem is truly thought-provoking, with a beautiful layering of meaning.
Thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Your poem is truly thought-provoking, with a beautiful layering of meaning.
Thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Nice to meet you, Isabel. Thank you for your review and insight. It pleases me that you find the depth of it. Thought-provoking is my intention. Blessings, Cathy
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You are most welcome, Cathy.
My pleasure.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You have written your poem well. I must be honest that I completely disagree with the premise of your poem. I'm an identical twin and I was drawn to helping disabled children all of my life whereas my twin was drawn to lying for a living as a public relations person making "hundreds of thousands of dollars" as she says. I didn't care how many dollars I made to help.
I'm not saying I was better what in saying is I was different and there are billions of other people whose lives prove your theory wrong. You cant help but have your own perspective though because, in fact, we are each unique. :)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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You have written your poem well. I must be honest that I completely disagree with the premise of your poem. I'm an identical twin and I was drawn to helping disabled children all of my life whereas my twin was drawn to lying for a living as a public relations person making "hundreds of thousands of dollars" as she says. I didn't care how many dollars I made to help.
I'm not saying I was better what in saying is I was different and there are billions of other people whose lives prove your theory wrong. You cant help but have your own perspective though because, in fact, we are each unique. :)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Nice to meet you, Alexandra. Disagreeing is fine, I keep to what I say; it is not a theory. It is spiritual, not physical. Thank you for your review and honesty. Blessings, Cathy
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I'm the same Cathy
Thank you, Alexandra
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, loved ones remain part of us. I can feel the emotion in this poem. You did a great job choosing words that caused the reader to feel.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Yes, loved ones remain part of us. I can feel the emotion in this poem. You did a great job choosing words that caused the reader to feel.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Hi Barbara! Thank you so much for the review and comments about my poem. I'm glad you could feel the emotions of it! Blessings, Cathy
Comment from JSD
An intriguing poem but I do like your intricate use of rhyme. The message is simple but your mode of delivering it is most successful. Well done.
John
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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An intriguing poem but I do like your intricate use of rhyme. The message is simple but your mode of delivering it is most successful. Well done.
John
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you, John, for your review. I'm thankful my mode of delivery was successful, and I appreciate that you pointed out the rhyming and simplicity of it. Blessings, Cathy
