What Is Love?
Naani8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, What is Love?, has the proper formatting and furthers the notion that the locomotion can get the ocean to -- uh Land-o-Goshin -- look at the time!
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This naani, What is Love?, has the proper formatting and furthers the notion that the locomotion can get the ocean to -- uh Land-o-Goshin -- look at the time!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
Comment from Writebynight
You capture the uncertainty of feeling here really well. The poem reads fast, the poet is confused and the rhyming words are almost contradictory, while maintaining the essence of love and attraction. Great poem! Good luck in the contest!
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You capture the uncertainty of feeling here really well. The poem reads fast, the poet is confused and the rhyming words are almost contradictory, while maintaining the essence of love and attraction. Great poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done for your Naani to include rhyme, and to finish with a question. It is relatable to all. A well chosen illustration to accompany your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Very well done for your Naani to include rhyme, and to finish with a question. It is relatable to all. A well chosen illustration to accompany your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Just about. Sounds close to potential love. That would definitely make one think what you do here. Is this love? That is a very good summary of what many feel, so I think people will be drawn to this poem and your strong and effective image. Best wishes! Alexandra
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Just about. Sounds close to potential love. That would definitely make one think what you do here. Is this love? That is a very good summary of what many feel, so I think people will be drawn to this poem and your strong and effective image. Best wishes! Alexandra
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from JSD
Lovely little poem about love. I really enjoyed your polysyllabic rhymes which work so well with your theme. Great photo too. Well done and good luck with the competition.
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Lovely little poem about love. I really enjoyed your polysyllabic rhymes which work so well with your theme. Great photo too. Well done and good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from royowen
You've written exactly 25 words, although it can be less, but unusually, it rhymes, they Naani is an original Indian form which we've acted to western form, this is beautifully and sensitively written, good luvk, blessings Roy
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You've written exactly 25 words, although it can be less, but unusually, it rhymes, they Naani is an original Indian form which we've acted to western form, this is beautifully and sensitively written, good luvk, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Reminds of that Dr. Alban song... baby don't hurt me:) but I like your definition better:"Dizzy with emotion
Heart making a commotion
Feelings of devotion
Is this what they call love?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest
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Reminds of that Dr. Alban song... baby don't hurt me:) but I like your definition better:"Dizzy with emotion
Heart making a commotion
Feelings of devotion
Is this what they call love?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An excellent rhyming naani poem of, I think I counted, 25 syllables 6/7/6/6. Fine theme of love throughout the 4 lines with a well expressed definition. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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An excellent rhyming naani poem of, I think I counted, 25 syllables 6/7/6/6. Fine theme of love throughout the 4 lines with a well expressed definition. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
