Darcy Calls a Meeting
Animal Crackers club challenge32 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Cute. I don't have animals I am allergic. But I wish I could. You write with real feelings for your subject.
This would make a good children's tale. I was thinking that Lola could be in a story about completely sleeping through a catastrophe, Just a thought. read "Murphy's Law and other stuff. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Cute. I don't have animals I am allergic. But I wish I could. You write with real feelings for your subject.
This would make a good children's tale. I was thinking that Lola could be in a story about completely sleeping through a catastrophe, Just a thought. read "Murphy's Law and other stuff. Karen
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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I like that idea with Lola sleeping through a catastrophic event.
I will check it out.
John
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Great minds and all that. How about that? I just gave you a personal prompt! Karen
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Very fun, not enough food is a huge concern for dogs. I think they would eat non stop if you let them. I'm very glad Darcy voted to let the dogs live with you.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Very fun, not enough food is a huge concern for dogs. I think they would eat non stop if you let them. I'm very glad Darcy voted to let the dogs live with you.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, Roxanne. Always appreciated.
John
Comment from jim vecchio
So far, each of the "Animal Crackers" entries I've read has been a winner! Thank you also for sharing that photo of Darcy. If you say the dogs can talk and call a meeting, I won't doubt you. As a child, in a family of five, I taught s parakeet to speak and he would greet everyone in the family by name when they entered the kitchen.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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So far, each of the "Animal Crackers" entries I've read has been a winner! Thank you also for sharing that photo of Darcy. If you say the dogs can talk and call a meeting, I won't doubt you. As a child, in a family of five, I taught s parakeet to speak and he would greet everyone in the family by name when they entered the kitchen.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, Jim.
I appreciate when you stop by to read my posts.
John
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I appreciate your words very much!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi John,
you write this content so well my Brother. It takes me back to all of your others stories where you bring a clever fury-human to life with such entertaining dialogue... this is an exciting niche for you to expand on.
Smiled and chuckled nearly all the way through the read. And like always from my experience, you have that positive message, the great moral that is such a magic touch, not only for us oldies, but also the younger audience and I would suspect, some of our fury-humans could heed the tale as well.
Great read John, well done, totally enjoyed it!
With our thoughts we create...
many tales.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Hi John,
you write this content so well my Brother. It takes me back to all of your others stories where you bring a clever fury-human to life with such entertaining dialogue... this is an exciting niche for you to expand on.
Smiled and chuckled nearly all the way through the read. And like always from my experience, you have that positive message, the great moral that is such a magic touch, not only for us oldies, but also the younger audience and I would suspect, some of our fury-humans could heed the tale as well.
Great read John, well done, totally enjoyed it!
With our thoughts we create...
many tales.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Ah, my brother.
Thank you for the six stars but more importantly, your generous words that continue to provide spirit and energy.
I hope all is well with you (and Jade), happy wife, happy life my friend!
Be well.
John
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My pleasure to reward creative with this meagre gesture John.
Unfortunately, all Jade's looking after me, making sure I don't hurt myself has caught up to her... but that's a long story... so not a very happy wife at present, but my life, I'm blessed. In my soul I'm happy!
Thank you my Brother... love and kind regards to you and your loved ones.
You be well!
James.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a really cute story. I'm amazed at all the animals on fanstory that have learned to talk. The cats are especially vocal. Many of them can type and write their own stories. That comes in handy with the human people have other things to do.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This is a really cute story. I'm amazed at all the animals on fanstory that have learned to talk. The cats are especially vocal. Many of them can type and write their own stories. That comes in handy with the human people have other things to do.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Now that would make an interesting story!
I thank you for reading.
John
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
So creative! Love the dialogue! I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. I best enjoyed
Best wishes! Alexandra
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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So creative! Love the dialogue! I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. I best enjoyed
Best wishes! Alexandra
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Alex, we all thank you for the great review. Woof?
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Darcy being so generous to accept two more sibling dogs (cousins?) to join her household. Yay! Enjoyed your dialogue and how fun you made Darcy's interpretation of human speech!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Hooray for Darcy being so generous to accept two more sibling dogs (cousins?) to join her household. Yay! Enjoyed your dialogue and how fun you made Darcy's interpretation of human speech!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Helen. I tried to write Darcy as I see her personality. She?s such a good dog.
Thanks for reading.
John
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Funny and sweet, and hear, hear, in the human house there is democracy for puppies. I like your story it brought me some memories about my adopted cats. Sorry Darcy, I am cat mom:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the writings.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Funny and sweet, and hear, hear, in the human house there is democracy for puppies. I like your story it brought me some memories about my adopted cats. Sorry Darcy, I am cat mom:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the writings.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Iza, thank you so much,
John
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is setting the mood of humor: "She's asleep you little rug monster," I interjected. "What's this meeting about? And make it snappy, puppy, I need to finish mowing the lawn." Now the reader is wondering what the meeting is about. This could actually be a metaphor.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This is setting the mood of humor: "She's asleep you little rug monster," I interjected. "What's this meeting about? And make it snappy, puppy, I need to finish mowing the lawn." Now the reader is wondering what the meeting is about. This could actually be a metaphor.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you a bunch, Liz.
John
Darcy
Lola
Snow
Aries
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***Sweet***
Comment from aryr
This was certainly entertaining, John. I adored the dog on the bed with all of the stuffed animals. This was definitely entertaining calling a meeting, only Darcy could do that. Poor Lola, she was snockered, she was wasted. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Peace!!!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This was certainly entertaining, John. I adored the dog on the bed with all of the stuffed animals. This was definitely entertaining calling a meeting, only Darcy could do that. Poor Lola, she was snockered, she was wasted. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Peace!!!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much fr a fine review. I certainly appreciate it.
John
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You are most welcome, John.
