Woody wants his dinner
A hungry bird7 total reviews
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Such a clever use of a pun in this charming poem!
Embarrassingly enough, I almost had to look up the word "peckish". I was pretty sure I knew what It meat, I just haven't heard it in a while.
Thanks for the laugh and the smile on this rainy day where I live and good luck in the contest!
Luv&stuff,
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Such a clever use of a pun in this charming poem!
Embarrassingly enough, I almost had to look up the word "peckish". I was pretty sure I knew what It meat, I just haven't heard it in a while.
Thanks for the laugh and the smile on this rainy day where I live and good luck in the contest!
Luv&stuff,
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Many thanks. Katie.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The font is very hard to read, i recommend white.
Excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. I like the
picture and general presentation. Concrete images are easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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The font is very hard to read, i recommend white.
Excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. I like the
picture and general presentation. Concrete images are easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Many thanks Gypsy. Have a nice evening. Jen.
Comment from jim vecchio
A woodpecker once said I was paranoid. He told me in morse code! Why did you use that red background? This poem should be READ, not red! And, that bird is not PECKish! He's more BRQANDOish!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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A woodpecker once said I was paranoid. He told me in morse code! Why did you use that red background? This poem should be READ, not red! And, that bird is not PECKish! He's more BRQANDOish!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks for reviewing. Brqandoish??
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Sorry. I ruined a pun! My hand tremors now and then, and causes my fingers to hit wrong keys. Sometimes, I have to rewrite every other word! I meant BRANDOish!
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Ha ha very good
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Thank you for making us happy with your poem!
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Ah bless you. X
Comment from ruminative scribbler
I really enjoyed this 3-5-3 poem. What a punchline - made me laugh so much and the picture compliments the work beautifully. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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I really enjoyed this 3-5-3 poem. What a punchline - made me laugh so much and the picture compliments the work beautifully. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review and the super stars. I really appreciate it and am so glad it amused you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAH. I see what you did there. Now THAT's funny. Way to stand out from all the other contests, Mystery Poet. Nice picture of Woody, too. (Being a redhead, that's my spirit animal, don'tcha know...)
Good luck in the polls. xo
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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HAHAHAHAH. I see what you did there. Now THAT's funny. Way to stand out from all the other contests, Mystery Poet. Nice picture of Woody, too. (Being a redhead, that's my spirit animal, don'tcha know...)
Good luck in the polls. xo
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thanks Rachelle for the great review. I?m so glad it amused you.
Comment from Paul Manton
Dear fellow comedian,
I LOVE puns - and this is the best one I've seen for ages!
I have nothing to say really - it's just perfect. I cannot improve it.
Spot on photograph and sensible use of capitals, for those without working funny bones. (Amazing how many here don't get jokes!)
So brilliant - I'm going to branch out and give it a SIX!
Paul
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Dear fellow comedian,
I LOVE puns - and this is the best one I've seen for ages!
I have nothing to say really - it's just perfect. I cannot improve it.
Spot on photograph and sensible use of capitals, for those without working funny bones. (Amazing how many here don't get jokes!)
So brilliant - I'm going to branch out and give it a SIX!
Paul
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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You have not given me a 6 Paul only a 5 yet again. I am so pleased that you like my puns. So many FS dudes take them at face value no sense of humour whatever.
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I have been trying to edit this to a six - remember not to put your name if this is a blind contest - you will certainly be disqualified if you do. I will ask Tom how to change the stars.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Absolutely amazing, terrific, picture. This poem type is very difficult to work with being so small,but you nailed it and were clever and funny about it. You write like a veteran.
It really is quite delicious. I look forward to more.
Karen
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Absolutely amazing, terrific, picture. This poem type is very difficult to work with being so small,but you nailed it and were clever and funny about it. You write like a veteran.
It really is quite delicious. I look forward to more.
Karen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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This is the second great review I have received from you this morning. I am honored. Thanks so much Karen.
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U R Welcome.
Karen
