Watch that Waste
In 11 syllables, plain-talk opinion3 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Wow - very skilfully written and a good strong message. I really liked this poem. Well done. It also fitted perfectly into the 3-5-3 syllable count.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Wow - very skilfully written and a good strong message. I really liked this poem. Well done. It also fitted perfectly into the 3-5-3 syllable count.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Watch That Waste, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers once again that the world is not our trashcan. We need to be aware as individuals and companies of our impact.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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This 3-5-3, Watch That Waste, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers once again that the world is not our trashcan. We need to be aware as individuals and companies of our impact.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the review
Comment from Barry Penfold
A curry inspiration for sure. Love the image and words are spot on. Pity you did not have more scope word wise. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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A curry inspiration for sure. Love the image and words are spot on. Pity you did not have more scope word wise. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the review. May try the 5-7-5 in a few days for a follow-up...