Songs of Recovery
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "A Reflection of Home"A collection of poems around healing.
5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your verse is an excellent tribute to your home town. It is full of vivid detail of architecture, shops , countryside and I particularly like "Here a daily commute becomes communion..." There is so much emotion woven through these memories and not difficult to appreciate the love you have for this town. Ideally and for this contest, it might have been better to shorten it as it is very long and that could daunt potential reviewers. But the work and imagination that has gone into this verse makes it a very good entry nonetheless. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Your verse is an excellent tribute to your home town. It is full of vivid detail of architecture, shops , countryside and I particularly like "Here a daily commute becomes communion..." There is so much emotion woven through these memories and not difficult to appreciate the love you have for this town. Ideally and for this contest, it might have been better to shorten it as it is very long and that could daunt potential reviewers. But the work and imagination that has gone into this verse makes it a very good entry nonetheless. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your time and kind words. I know I probably should have shortened it some, but I wanted to be sure I made the word count and it just kinda came out this way. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week!
Comment from Nomar Chagrin
This was delightful from start to finish. Very well-polished and descriptive wording kept the imagery and flow vibrant all the way through.
I'm a native Montanan (born and raised in Big Sandy) and have been to Helena many times. You capture the essence of the city quite nicely.
The description of how the city and nature mingle together was spot on.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This was delightful from start to finish. Very well-polished and descriptive wording kept the imagery and flow vibrant all the way through.
I'm a native Montanan (born and raised in Big Sandy) and have been to Helena many times. You capture the essence of the city quite nicely.
The description of how the city and nature mingle together was spot on.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Another Montanan! Awesome! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and kind words, especially since you know the subject enough to tell me if I'm accurate. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week.
Comment from RodG
You make your hometown seem like Utopia to me, a place where wilderness buttresses settled places, and you definitely make the reader feel at home in your favorite restaurant or just about any place downtown. I truly enjoyed your tribute. Rod
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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You make your hometown seem like Utopia to me, a place where wilderness buttresses settled places, and you definitely make the reader feel at home in your favorite restaurant or just about any place downtown. I truly enjoyed your tribute. Rod
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your time and kind words. I'm glad I could give you a slice of my home. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Mintybee
This descriptive poem is beautiful and touching. It's inspiring, and dwells on nature and in community. It really lets the atmosphere of the town sink in. The strong diction choices, the alliteration, and the imagery make this a lovely poem.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This descriptive poem is beautiful and touching. It's inspiring, and dwells on nature and in community. It really lets the atmosphere of the town sink in. The strong diction choices, the alliteration, and the imagery make this a lovely poem.
Mintybee
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your time and kind words. I'm glad it came out well, and I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You have written a full and complete masterpiece of your hometown the good the bad and sad, the hope the potential, and the meaning. Due to your thoughtfully chosen words and descriptions, you brought me into your town, as a reader and kept me there as you have many angles and considerations of what it would be like to live there, and to dream there. Any home town that has produced an excellent Writer, such as yourself, should expect to be known by all! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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You have written a full and complete masterpiece of your hometown the good the bad and sad, the hope the potential, and the meaning. Due to your thoughtfully chosen words and descriptions, you brought me into your town, as a reader and kept me there as you have many angles and considerations of what it would be like to live there, and to dream there. Any home town that has produced an excellent Writer, such as yourself, should expect to be known by all! Best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad all the pieces of it were clear. I really appreciate your time and kind words, and I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week.