Charity
So important5 total reviews
Comment from PENofFIRE
This is a beautifully written poem depicting what a Christian's life should be like. This is what Jesus would do. It is living the Scripture, "Do unto others as you would have them unto you. Best wishes in winning the contest. Pen
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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This is a beautifully written poem depicting what a Christian's life should be like. This is what Jesus would do. It is living the Scripture, "Do unto others as you would have them unto you. Best wishes in winning the contest. Pen
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Thanks!
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Please read my haiku sweet poem.
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Hi Pookietoo, It has been a while since I reviewed Charity. You asked me to check out something you wrote but I could not find it. I just wanted you to know I wasn't ignoring you.
May the Lord bless you richly, Pen
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That is ok.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
I think if everyone would just do half of the things listed in your poem, the world would already be a better place.
Showing empathy, being there for a friend, a neighbour even a stranger will brighten not only their day but ours.
Helping others is spiritually rewarding.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
I think if everyone would just do half of the things listed in your poem, the world would already be a better place.
Showing empathy, being there for a friend, a neighbour even a stranger will brighten not only their day but ours.
Helping others is spiritually rewarding.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well worded spiritual poem you have penned about charity, which is love. You used a very nice picture and very good, true and descriptive words. I found one thing for you to check out please:
Trying hard to understang
(understand)
Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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This is a very nice and very well worded spiritual poem you have penned about charity, which is love. You used a very nice picture and very good, true and descriptive words. I found one thing for you to check out please:
Trying hard to understang
(understand)
Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Thanks!
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Please read all poems in contest.
Comment from jim vecchio
With your very smooth-flowing words, you described the duties and privileges of a Christian as we serve Him. If we cannot love our brother, whom we have seen, how can we love God whom we have not seen?
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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With your very smooth-flowing words, you described the duties and privileges of a Christian as we serve Him. If we cannot love our brother, whom we have seen, how can we love God whom we have not seen?
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Right!
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Also, besides my brother, I love your words!
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have several computer glitches throughout this writing. They are easy to remove with editing. Your poem is nicely written otherwise. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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You have several computer glitches throughout this writing. They are easy to remove with editing. Your poem is nicely written otherwise. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thanks!