2023 Gypsy's Tanka
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Extremely sensual, yet extremely innocent. You captured the moment perfectly. I enjoyed reading and enjoyed the artwork. You provided us with another wonderful package. Thank you.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Extremely sensual, yet extremely innocent. You captured the moment perfectly. I enjoyed reading and enjoyed the artwork. You provided us with another wonderful package. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The picture was beautiful engaging a couple in a sweet embrace. Your words covered it all, they described the whole picture. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The picture was beautiful engaging a couple in a sweet embrace. Your words covered it all, they described the whole picture. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
i saw the title and thought it had to do with those stupid twilight movies LOL!
i like the lines with lips ajar in a half moon smile - cool imagery there!
tangled up in you is an excellent ending line
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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i saw the title and thought it had to do with those stupid twilight movies LOL!
i like the lines with lips ajar in a half moon smile - cool imagery there!
tangled up in you is an excellent ending line
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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No... not stupid... lol I'm a twilight saga fan. I think it's romantic. My daughter says that Edward is creepy because he watches her sleep. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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lol!
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lol!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- good picture presentation- good syllable count and flow - paints a clear picture - half moon smile - clever - cerulean eyes- good job AP
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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I like your tanka poem- good picture presentation- good syllable count and flow - paints a clear picture - half moon smile - clever - cerulean eyes- good job AP
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Oh this is spectacular Gypsy. Nice color adjective for blue eyes and your 7 syllable line ties in nicely with your title. I recognize tangled up in you from a line from a Bob Dylan song called Tangled Up in Blue which is similar.
Wonderful work
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Oh this is spectacular Gypsy. Nice color adjective for blue eyes and your 7 syllable line ties in nicely with your title. I recognize tangled up in you from a line from a Bob Dylan song called Tangled Up in Blue which is similar.
Wonderful work
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Yes, I love Bob Dylan and that phrase shows up in my poems sometimes.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You always show such intense amorous feelings through your love poems. I liked how the narrator could see the break of day in her lover's eyes and the smile makes her feel completely "tangled up" in him.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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You always show such intense amorous feelings through your love poems. I liked how the narrator could see the break of day in her lover's eyes and the smile makes her feel completely "tangled up" in him.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Amorous is similar to the Spanish so I know it well. Amor
Thank you big sister.
Love
Marival xoxo
Comment from patcelaw
Mostly written particular for me. It was pretty on the page and you worded it very well. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you a very good evening and a good weekend. Patricia
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Mostly written particular for me. It was pretty on the page and you worded it very well. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you a very good evening and a good weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JT traveller
Cerulean has recently become one of my favourite words. What a passionate, romantic poem. The layout, as always, makes your words stand out. Well done. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Cerulean has recently become one of my favourite words. What a passionate, romantic poem. The layout, as always, makes your words stand out. Well done. Jacqueline
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
