Hope
Our time of hope . HOPE.... Precious moments so clear, a13 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! It takes wisdom to "release the fear with hope" and to savor the present time that we have. This is very thoughtfully crafted and I can see why it won. Congratulations!!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Amen! It takes wisdom to "release the fear with hope" and to savor the present time that we have. This is very thoughtfully crafted and I can see why it won. Congratulations!!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for finding this poem which I wrote when I was very young.
I am delighted that you like it.
Lisa
Comment from Sarita Méndez
This is a beautiful poem in which there is all what can happen in life. I'm happy that you won the first place with it ! One or two years ago I wrote some haikus about Hope for a contest, and your poem reflects my thoughts about this theme.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This is a beautiful poem in which there is all what can happen in life. I'm happy that you won the first place with it ! One or two years ago I wrote some haikus about Hope for a contest, and your poem reflects my thoughts about this theme.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing HOPE, one of the first ones I posted on Fan Story... Always nice to have writers read my older posted work.
Lisa
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That was a good read.
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Have you read Nymph?
Lisa
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Not yet, but I will.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Look how wise you were even at that young age!! Very impressive. And, better still, look how your writing has withstood the test of time! What a beautiful poem...and an equally lovely piece of artwork to accentuate it. No WONDER it won first!! Congrats to you! xoxo
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Look how wise you were even at that young age!! Very impressive. And, better still, look how your writing has withstood the test of time! What a beautiful poem...and an equally lovely piece of artwork to accentuate it. No WONDER it won first!! Congrats to you! xoxo
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Thank you so very much Rachelle...
I edited my Forevermore poem to include rhymes, not sure if it is too late... would you mind reading my new version?
Lisa
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I'd love to! Thank you for asking. xo
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Beautiful Lisa, even in youth we are able to take a moment to reflect on our mortality. We never age, just our stubborn bodies refuse to drink from the fountain of youth.
Thank you for sharing this ageless gem.
John
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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Beautiful Lisa, even in youth we are able to take a moment to reflect on our mortality. We never age, just our stubborn bodies refuse to drink from the fountain of youth.
Thank you for sharing this ageless gem.
John
Comment Written 15-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2023
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What a very kind review dearest John.
Much appreciated.
Lisa
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations on your contest win here, Lisa! This is a lovely little verse in which you simply and skilfully refer to this dichotomy of hope and fear upon which so much of our lives are based. It is by opting to follow the way of truth that we're able to let go of the fear and replace it with (life-affirming) hope. Less is always more and your succinct verse conveys the message much more effectively:) An inspiring read! Well done! Debbie x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Congratulations on your contest win here, Lisa! This is a lovely little verse in which you simply and skilfully refer to this dichotomy of hope and fear upon which so much of our lives are based. It is by opting to follow the way of truth that we're able to let go of the fear and replace it with (life-affirming) hope. Less is always more and your succinct verse conveys the message much more effectively:) An inspiring read! Well done! Debbie x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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What a doll you are to leave such an amazing review.
Thank you so much!
Lisa
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Beautiful Lisa! Congratulations! It's wonderful how, at 2ternty years old, you had such a depth of spiritual perspective. I was two then, but those were "heavy" times. I was 2 but I had siblings who were 18, 15, 10, 2 (my 3- minutes older twin)
I like your beautiful presentation too. :))
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Beautiful Lisa! Congratulations! It's wonderful how, at 2ternty years old, you had such a depth of spiritual perspective. I was two then, but those were "heavy" times. I was 2 but I had siblings who were 18, 15, 10, 2 (my 3- minutes older twin)
I like your beautiful presentation too. :))
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much.
Would you like to be Fans?
Lisa
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Yes, thank you!
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Sent message too quickly. I have been up all night. Hence, typos I'm sure
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Congratulations, very nice poems, happy for you. To all deserve, it's a very lovely home from a wonderful talent like yourself.
I like the picture you chose to. It's quite nice and I see you're doing well, I'm happy for you!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Congratulations, very nice poems, happy for you. To all deserve, it's a very lovely home from a wonderful talent like yourself.
I like the picture you chose to. It's quite nice and I see you're doing well, I'm happy for you!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Oh I just realised i won for my poem Hope, for the meaning of Life contest... not my other poem, because the contest is not over... That one is not a Blind contest
Comment from Cathy M
I wonder what was going through your mind so many years ago where you wrote something so profound. Living life is about hope and keeping it alive while doing the best you can every day. I am giving this poem six stars and hoping to see you on the front page.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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I wonder what was going through your mind so many years ago where you wrote something so profound. Living life is about hope and keeping it alive while doing the best you can every day. I am giving this poem six stars and hoping to see you on the front page.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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How nice of you! I wonder too what goes through my mind... then and now...
Wow, 6 Stars!! Wonder what others will think of this poem...
After the contest is over I will find you and connect.
Comment from karenina
The wonderful image chosen drew me right in! It is very true that without hope life does lack meaning. We need to look ahead, accept what has transpired, and "Move on to the truth and enjoy" (my favorite line here!)
Best wishes to you in this "Meaning of Life" contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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The wonderful image chosen drew me right in! It is very true that without hope life does lack meaning. We need to look ahead, accept what has transpired, and "Move on to the truth and enjoy" (my favorite line here!)
Best wishes to you in this "Meaning of Life" contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review
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You're welcome!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is a lovely poem and it amazed me that you had such a talent for meter and rhyme already back then. Along with the common sense and what it took to know to be a better person. Thanks for sharing this awesome poem of hope with us.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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This is a lovely poem and it amazed me that you had such a talent for meter and rhyme already back then. Along with the common sense and what it took to know to be a better person. Thanks for sharing this awesome poem of hope with us.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
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I love that you are long winded... This is a Blind contest...
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Oh no, I will go in and change it right away. Sorry
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I took care of it and I best learn to pay better attention.
Thanks for letting me know.
