Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me smile with the sentiments and the clever rhymes here Michelle, I am hopeless at this game so I will never gain any fame, a fine poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023

I thought all you Brits were pros! Hahaha

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 07-Aug-2023

I?d rather play chess! Ha ha ha x

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Well done with your mono-rhyme here, Michelle! Your verse is well rhymed and tells a flowing story but I'm wondering why you put a full-stop at the end of each line. No need. Your flow is being interrupted by this punctuation. Otherwise great job. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023

I understand. That must be my need to write correctly!

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

You could be talking about fan story lol. I have played darts in the past and I have such bad aim. Since I am also very short, I had few exciting moments, but the companionship of playing is the reason to play I believe. Excellent writing! Best wishes!

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023

Thank you for your stars and review.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

A fun little mono rhyme with an entertaining subject matter. A jaunty rhythm as well. Thank you for sharing this with the readers.

John

"Poetry is the space between words."

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023

Thank you for your review and stars.