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2023 Gypsy's Tanka

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "* You Are My North Star *"
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8 total reviews 
Comment from aryr
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This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. I liked the first picture of the lady on the cliff portraying the Northern Star. Your words were inspirational, just following my voice across the universe. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 03-Aug-2023
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is simply beautiful in words and presentation. It gives the reader a sense of peace, love and comfort.
Very well written. I enjoyed the image.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoy star gazing and the North Star will guide us with God's help. He's always there to lead the way. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I enjoyed the entire presentation.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    Barbara,

    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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It's good that the narrator knows who her North Star is. If we trust God as our North Star and let Him guide us "across the universe" of our lives, we know we will be safe in His love.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, big sister. God has always been there for me when i needed Him.

    Love xoxo

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 02-Aug-2023
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Comment from AP Apgar
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I Like your Gogyohka poem- nice picture presentation- interesting story- however- I would suggest-...and guides me" -would only make sense to
Me if we use 'guides (you) ' answering the question- are you looking at the North Star ?? See what you think- Good job -AP

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    I used personification and poetic romance.

    Thank you, ap

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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i love looking up at the stars...
this was a nice gogyohka
very dream with a smooth flow
and cool pics

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


p.s. the fanstory gremlins are out again with As and ?s LOL



 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Shelley,

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written, and it reads very well when it's really loud. I enjoyed your presentation is very pretty. I wish you the very best evening and good day tomorrow. Patricia

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Patricia,

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Not a star gazer but I love to look up at the night sky. This was a wonderful poem that personified the moon as a guiding soul. Great imagery and uplifting feel. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
    Gretchen,

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs