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Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAH!! I guess sometimes we just live right in this world! Imagine -inspiration of that magnitude, JUST when you needed it most!! Adorable entry for this contest, Mystery Writer. I bet it'll garner many votes for you.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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HAHAHAHAH!! I guess sometimes we just live right in this world! Imagine -inspiration of that magnitude, JUST when you needed it most!! Adorable entry for this contest, Mystery Writer. I bet it'll garner many votes for you.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
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May our lives be filled with lions and penguins!hahaha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and story about the lion and penguin, an unlikely pair.
-Your opening lines are good showing how
you didn't have any inspiration,and then you did!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and story about the lion and penguin, an unlikely pair.
-Your opening lines are good showing how
you didn't have any inspiration,and then you did!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Someone else got 27 lol. I will make a change.
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Someone else got 27 lol. I will make a change.
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You did a great job. I changed the review for you.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet,
this might be your first attempt but you don't lack a wild imagination.
That said:..
That is definitely a male lion with a thick mane. Females don't have manes
Secondly, you have 27 syllables, two more than allowed. Best to re-check the requirements on contest page.
Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Ciao poet,
this might be your first attempt but you don't lack a wild imagination.
That said:..
That is definitely a male lion with a thick mane. Females don't have manes
Secondly, you have 27 syllables, two more than allowed. Best to re-check the requirements on contest page.
Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Some one else got 26. I will make a change. I think that some may think poem is two syllables.
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Some one else got 26. I will make a change. I think that some may think poem is two syllables.
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Ciao!
Just punch on your computer :
Haiku count
Paste and copy and press count
It gave 27
You could just change lioness to lion ( it is a male after all )
And leave off wild
That way your poem is practically the same
Best of luck!
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Where do you find it on an iPad?
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Try here:
https://www.haikusyllablecounter.com/
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good, very cute. Good humor. I think a lioness would get a thundering reaction from anyone, but then, the penguin, would make us say, "what the heck" and shake our head, but still run and hide. Lol. Well done. Great imagery. Good job with putting the photo into words. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Hello author, very good, very cute. Good humor. I think a lioness would get a thundering reaction from anyone, but then, the penguin, would make us say, "what the heck" and shake our head, but still run and hide. Lol. Well done. Great imagery. Good job with putting the photo into words. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you for you encouragement.
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Thank you for you encouragement.