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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Lesson: Sometimes it is okay to be content to drip dry.

Pollyanna thought: It would have been worse if it had been poison ivy!

Still, horrible scenario. Hopefully, your reward will come in winning the contest!!!


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
    Ha ha ha LOL thank you so very much for stopping by and reading this. I appreciate your review and hope your evening is great! Thanks again!
reply by Rachelle Allen on 28-Jul-2023
    My pleasure. You know I find your talent delightful!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
    Thank you!
Comment from JSD
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Lol. Ouch!!!!! You poor thing. This is hilarious and made me grimace with empathetic pain. Well written. All the best of luck with the competition.

John

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
    Hi, Joan, LOL. Yes, I can laugh about it now. But back then. Don't anyone think about touching it I would have murdered them and to go pee stung like an SOB! Thank you again for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I even laugh about it too. Because what a bonehead maneuver, LOL not something I'll repeat. Obviously, I hope your day is great, thank you again!
Comment from Lisasview
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Oh my G... did this really happen!!
How horrible...I feel for you...
But at the same time this story of yours is hysterical..
Good luck in the contest Lea..
Lisasview

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
    Yes, I'm afraid it did happen I was about 18 years old too impatient to stop to go to the bathroom so this is what I get for it. Oh yeah, to go pee really stung and don't you think about sitting on the thing! Oh, my Lord, LOL. Thank you for your review. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of it. That was my goal, have yourself a great day, thanks again!
reply by Lisasview on 28-Jul-2023
    Agin so so hysterical... Read it to my sweet husband and we both laughed...
    Lisa
Comment from JT traveller
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Oh my, sounds awful. When you gotta go, you gotta go. Drip dry next time?

I feel for you. Great story. One of a kind.

Best of luck in the competition, Lea.

Jacqueline xx

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
    LOL thank you, Jacqueline for your empathy. I appreciate it I can laugh about it now. But back then, I looked like. I wrote too many horses!
    Thank you again for your review and hope your day is grand!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness Lea, what did you do here? Thank must have been so painful! You did make me laugh though with your vivid descriptions, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
    I'm so glad you were amused. Yes, indeed, I can laugh about it today. But not back then! Bow legged was the name and flavor of the day! Thank you for your review as always. I'm glad you gave you a smile. Have a great day!