Ghost
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "No Change Without Change"Biography/Supernatural
15 total reviews
Comment from royowen
From what I can glean from scripture is that these things need to remain in the past, because the only moment we have is now! Nothing should rule our past, nor determine our future, otherwise today, tomorrow and yesterday need to be dealt with all the time too, way too much weight to bear Lea. One has to leave what we can't control, just where it lives, but not here. Blessings Roy
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From what I can glean from scripture is that these things need to remain in the past, because the only moment we have is now! Nothing should rule our past, nor determine our future, otherwise today, tomorrow and yesterday need to be dealt with all the time too, way too much weight to bear Lea. One has to leave what we can't control, just where it lives, but not here. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
Comment from Esther Brown
Once again, I am blown away by the simple straight forward way you share your story. Writing does free us from the past. But the backbone to stand up and claim your story is your glory. I want to read the whole story when you complete it. Esther
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Once again, I am blown away by the simple straight forward way you share your story. Writing does free us from the past. But the backbone to stand up and claim your story is your glory. I want to read the whole story when you complete it. Esther
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Esther thank you so much for your fine review I appreciate it and your insight is amazing! Thanks for your fine rating and your great comments I hope you have an awesome evening!
Comment from Julie G1
Very emotive writing, well done. Victim blaming is their bag, no little woman is to blame, even at that age. This story uses an apt and vivid choice of word pictures. The situation resolved, by being bullied toughened the main character. Keep on writing, this story works well for the reader.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Very emotive writing, well done. Victim blaming is their bag, no little woman is to blame, even at that age. This story uses an apt and vivid choice of word pictures. The situation resolved, by being bullied toughened the main character. Keep on writing, this story works well for the reader.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Julie so sorry for taking so long returning your kind review I have been in the mountains where there are zero reception. Thank you so much for reading I really appreciate your kind review and your time I hope you have a wonderful day!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
As I said before, I don't understand how a parent leaves the children behind for a man. Why is he more important than her own kids? Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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As I said before, I don't understand how a parent leaves the children behind for a man. Why is he more important than her own kids? Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you Iza for your review happy to see you here and I thank you so much for your comments too and your fine rating thanks so much I hope you have the best day look forward to seeing you again thank you!
Comment from BermyBye50
Lea,
I am reading the 3rd chapter of your 1st Book 'Ghost' and I am shocked and stunned and often numbed by your words and the descriptions of the events of your youth that played out in your life. I can see in my minds eye the debilitating effects of the things that happened to you at such a young age and cannot but be amazed how you were able to endure and survive in light of what was happening to you as a child.
Your story and words have had a sobering effect on me as I sit and meditate on what you went through.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Lea,
I am reading the 3rd chapter of your 1st Book 'Ghost' and I am shocked and stunned and often numbed by your words and the descriptions of the events of your youth that played out in your life. I can see in my minds eye the debilitating effects of the things that happened to you at such a young age and cannot but be amazed how you were able to endure and survive in light of what was happening to you as a child.
Your story and words have had a sobering effect on me as I sit and meditate on what you went through.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you again my friend!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
There is so much to remember and so much to write. I think if children I tried to help as a teacher and hope they eventually have found their way to a PC and website where they could write and share. I still worry about all the students I have known. I'm so glad you are writing this.
With love & support,
Alexandra
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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There is so much to remember and so much to write. I think if children I tried to help as a teacher and hope they eventually have found their way to a PC and website where they could write and share. I still worry about all the students I have known. I'm so glad you are writing this.
With love & support,
Alexandra
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thank you my friend i'm hoping that this Book and subsequent novels help children and teenagers and an adult student anyone who wants to read it. I really hope they get something from it a clear and strong message. Thank you, my friend as well as always. I'm happy to see you come up you're a fine reviewer and a great friend!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, wouldn't it be nice if those memories could all be washed away or forgotten. But they just keep coming back, getting in the way whenever we try to move on and forget. But thankfully in time, for most, the visions blur, but the hatred for the culprits never goes away to let us completely heal. We only want to be loved, but who can we trust. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Oh, wouldn't it be nice if those memories could all be washed away or forgotten. But they just keep coming back, getting in the way whenever we try to move on and forget. But thankfully in time, for most, the visions blur, but the hatred for the culprits never goes away to let us completely heal. We only want to be loved, but who can we trust. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Yes, trust without love, it's a tough one love without trust. Just a stuff you have to have both. That is the recipe, and that is the key.
Easier said than done, though.
And I will close the door on these memories. Just as soon as I have finished writing it all out for anyone who wants to see it, my parents never paid for what they did and they still try and cover it up to this day. But I will get to that. I appreciate you hanging in there again. I can't stop saying that it is not a fun read is tough to write it but I feel like every time I do. It's like that Blood Pressure cuff that starts off tight and then slowly. Let's go. That's what I'm feeling like, so it is a good thank you again, Ric!!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I like that you start and finish off by telling and showing us how much the revisit to the small child you were affects you in the writing of your story. It's hard to understand how a mother can allow this. Well, she wasn't a 'mother' at all.
Stay well Lea.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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I like that you start and finish off by telling and showing us how much the revisit to the small child you were affects you in the writing of your story. It's hard to understand how a mother can allow this. Well, she wasn't a 'mother' at all.
Stay well Lea.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Valda Thank you! I didn't know at the time, but all the evidence of abuse was being covered up. My family is high up in social services. But this will follow as I carry on writing. Thank you so much for following along I so appreciate you and your support I hope you have a great evening thanks again!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Woah, Lea...
This offering has drained me...
I simply cannot fathom the horror and evil into which you were thrust.
I spent the entire day with my grandsons; the eldest is three years old; his baby brother is will be one month old tomorrow. So much joy and love for the two of them. To think that either one of them would ever experience one iota of what you had your siblings experienced makes me want to vomit...
Your writing is controlled in this piece - far more so than when I initially was introduced to your work. There is power in the control.
You must continue...
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Woah, Lea...
This offering has drained me...
I simply cannot fathom the horror and evil into which you were thrust.
I spent the entire day with my grandsons; the eldest is three years old; his baby brother is will be one month old tomorrow. So much joy and love for the two of them. To think that either one of them would ever experience one iota of what you had your siblings experienced makes me want to vomit...
Your writing is controlled in this piece - far more so than when I initially was introduced to your work. There is power in the control.
You must continue...
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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I appreciate your kind words and your reviews so much and for hanging in there. I know it's a hard read. I think it's a necessary one for some people out there. But if i'm unable to help someone in any way possible I am satisfied. Thank you again for your fine review. I hope you have the most amazing evening. And I'm so happy you have beautiful grandchildren. Thank you again, have a great night!
Comment from prettybluebirds
As I read more of your story, I can only feel the deepest, sincere compassion for you. What an awful way for two little girls to grow up. As you said, you had no childhood. It must be terribly hard to relive and share these memories with us. I hope telling us your tragic story brings you some measure of relief.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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As I read more of your story, I can only feel the deepest, sincere compassion for you. What an awful way for two little girls to grow up. As you said, you had no childhood. It must be terribly hard to relive and share these memories with us. I hope telling us your tragic story brings you some measure of relief.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Hi! I cannot tell you how much your support means to me. You and others have really leaned into the things that I'm trying to say even though it's so difficult to read. As I write these I'm like a Blood Pressure cuff. When you have the test done, the Blood Pressure. Cuff Is very tight and the slowly over a amount of time the cugf releases. that is what it's like to write each and every chapter. And I know that when I'm done, the door will close. In there and reading it is like gold to me enjoy your evening!
