Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Hi Lea!!!
Interesting dark deep poem.
I think you meant Death takes not takeš???. Right?
I am going crazy reviewing and trying to get as much funny money as I can to promote my two poems and one dialog....this week....
Lisa, in Spain

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023

My cars motor died on the freeway a few weeks ago. I was stuck on the highway for 36 hours. The poem is an account if what happened. Thank you for you review and hope you get all you need to promote your work which us amazing! Thank you again!

reply by Lisasview on 24-Jul-2023

Was I correct with the smalll edit?
Oh gosh 36 hours...yikes...that is unbelievable... especially if it was super hot...
Lisa

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I'm having trouble reading your poem in cursive font. Please use a different one next time. I see this poem is full of anger and rage. The photo matches its mood, too.

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023

Hello. I'm the woman on the highway. I had to go offline for a bit while authorities dealt with it.
Thank you for your suggestion and as always your insightful review! I hope you have a great day!

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is certainly chilling writing. It is well-executed and leads the reader to the horrifying ending. The artwork is perfect for the subject of your poem. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023

I thank you so much for your kind review and thank you for your insight. I hope your day is great!