It's Twelve O'Clock
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Comment from aryr
This was an enticing Empat Empat, damommy. The picture was purely enticing. I loved your words because they zeroed in due to the nightmarish thought. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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This was an enticing Empat Empat, damommy. The picture was purely enticing. I loved your words because they zeroed in due to the nightmarish thought. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much. Hugs to you.
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Most welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with effective
imagery, rhyme, and repeating like.
-I like your choice of topic and
creating the eerie mood.
-One thing Iearned is to beware of
"the nighttime's crest," "ghosts and ghoulies,"
and "darkened corners" with "something evil lurking there."
-A very good concluding verse.
-I enjoyed reading your poem!!
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with effective
imagery, rhyme, and repeating like.
-I like your choice of topic and
creating the eerie mood.
-One thing Iearned is to beware of
"the nighttime's crest," "ghosts and ghoulies,"
and "darkened corners" with "something evil lurking there."
-A very good concluding verse.
-I enjoyed reading your poem!!
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you. That makes me happy.
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You are welcome, and I am glad it made you happy😊
Comment from Wendy G
That poem is quite eerie and dark (appropriately for the theme of the midnight hour). It was very well written and met the required format . An enjoyable read, so thank you for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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That poem is quite eerie and dark (appropriately for the theme of the midnight hour). It was very well written and met the required format . An enjoyable read, so thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for reviewing. Always appreciate you.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Well done, Yvonne. The form you have chosen fits in with the prompt very well. The repeated line is just right. Nice picture to go along with the poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Well done, Yvonne. The form you have chosen fits in with the prompt very well. The repeated line is just right. Nice picture to go along with the poem.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I hope it didn't scare you. hahaha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I enjoyed the darker write in your Empat poem Yvonne.
You've convinced me to beware of the twelve o'clock nighttime crest. Anyway, I 'm usually tucked up asleep by then. LOL enjoyed this one, well done Yvonne.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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I enjoyed the darker write in your Empat poem Yvonne.
You've convinced me to beware of the twelve o'clock nighttime crest. Anyway, I 'm usually tucked up asleep by then. LOL enjoyed this one, well done Yvonne.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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I'm glad you're safe at the midnight hour. I'm often still awake, but so far, so good. Thank you for this wonderful review and for the stars!
Comment from Bill Schott
This cascading poem, It's Twelve O'clock, has the proper formatting and gives warning that this time of night is open to many bad situations which often occur.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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This cascading poem, It's Twelve O'clock, has the proper formatting and gives warning that this time of night is open to many bad situations which often occur.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from BethShelby
Your Empat Empat poetry is an eerie little poem. So midnight is the witching hour. I'm often awake then. It may be too late. I might alread be possessed Good job of makeing excellent pome with any format.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Your Empat Empat poetry is an eerie little poem. So midnight is the witching hour. I'm often awake then. It may be too late. I might alread be possessed Good job of makeing excellent pome with any format.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I'm often awake then. So far, so good. But would I know if I've been possessed? Mwah hahaha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an excellent job with your club response,
Yvonne. The picture and color scheme set an eerie
tone. Your words were well thought out. The rhymes
worked well. Great job with the requirements of the
style. The lines flowed smoothly, and the repeated
line fit in seamlessly. You told a great ghost story.
Remind me to never go through dark woods near
midnight up til midnight. Who knew what lurked
in waiting for the suspecting to venture there?
Thanks for sharing and participating, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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You did an excellent job with your club response,
Yvonne. The picture and color scheme set an eerie
tone. Your words were well thought out. The rhymes
worked well. Great job with the requirements of the
style. The lines flowed smoothly, and the repeated
line fit in seamlessly. You told a great ghost story.
Remind me to never go through dark woods near
midnight up til midnight. Who knew what lurked
in waiting for the suspecting to venture there?
Thanks for sharing and participating, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Yep, best to stay indoors and well lighted. Thank you so much for this.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL When I read your title, I started singing the Alan Jackson song, 'It's Five o'clock Somewhere'. No clue where that came from. I guess my ADD kicked in.
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It's well written and I promise I will not be caught outside at 12:00. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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LOL When I read your title, I started singing the Alan Jackson song, 'It's Five o'clock Somewhere'. No clue where that came from. I guess my ADD kicked in.
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It's well written and I promise I will not be caught outside at 12:00. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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I'm glad you listened. Best be indoors and well lightes. Thanks, Barbara.
Comment from Lisasview
I really loved your poem as it flowed so well!!
The font and color are a perfect choice...
I see a period after "I tell you this because it's true"
And, the next sentence begins with or....so I do not think a period works there...
Lisasview
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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I really loved your poem as it flowed so well!!
The font and color are a perfect choice...
I see a period after "I tell you this because it's true"
And, the next sentence begins with or....so I do not think a period works there...
Lisasview
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thanks for reviewing.
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Hope you were okay with my review and the period?
Lisa
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I was very pleased with it. I'm sorry that my answer sounded so short. I was in a hurry. Thank you so much for cating.
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Oh no worries
Just wanted to be sure you understood my review and that it was helpful?
Lisa
