Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from BethShelby
There a sad ending to this story but I'm sure something very similar has been played out on the battlefields many times. With couples separated in this way nothing is certain. They can only hope they will be lucky enough to see each other again.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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There a sad ending to this story but I'm sure something very similar has been played out on the battlefields many times. With couples separated in this way nothing is certain. They can only hope they will be lucky enough to see each other again.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Comment from Lisasview
Oh my goodness.... your Flash Fiction story gave me goosebumps...
I could see the entire scene..
Wishing you the best of luck in the upcoming contest.
Lisasview, new to this site
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Oh my goodness.... your Flash Fiction story gave me goosebumps...
I could see the entire scene..
Wishing you the best of luck in the upcoming contest.
Lisasview, new to this site
Comment Written 14-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very sad story, I guess I am not a fun of the inglorious bastard kind of subject, and death it's always present in a war situation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Very sad story, I guess I am not a fun of the inglorious bastard kind of subject, and death it's always present in a war situation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Comment from Ulla
Brett, this is a poignant write. I do realise it's from WW2 but could as well be from the present war in Ukraine. Tragic incidents like this happens all the time. Why can't we stop this madness? Because the aggressor don't want to. So we have to fight on.
Good luck, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Brett, this is a poignant write. I do realise it's from WW2 but could as well be from the present war in Ukraine. Tragic incidents like this happens all the time. Why can't we stop this madness? Because the aggressor don't want to. So we have to fight on.
Good luck, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Comment from royowen
I suppose when life seems hopeless, the best thing to do would be to commit suicide, I fo believe soldiers did actually do that, if they refused to go "over the top" they would be executed anyway, the carnage was incredible, beautiful written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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I suppose when life seems hopeless, the best thing to do would be to commit suicide, I fo believe soldiers did actually do that, if they refused to go "over the top" they would be executed anyway, the carnage was incredible, beautiful written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was one of a million battlefield last moments. Even in his last moments, Mark wanted to hold his beloved. The emotion ran deep through this. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this flash fiction piece. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This was one of a million battlefield last moments. Even in his last moments, Mark wanted to hold his beloved. The emotion ran deep through this. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this flash fiction piece. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this flash fiction contest entry with us. I so wish our governments would realize war solves nothing. Of course, it's not the elite that goes to war. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you for sharing this flash fiction contest entry with us. I so wish our governments would realize war solves nothing. Of course, it's not the elite that goes to war. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
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Comment from JSD
An interesting little piece. Good action and drama although I'm not convinced by a battle between a panzer and a man with a rifle. However, your use of the photograph is very poignant.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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An interesting little piece. Good action and drama although I'm not convinced by a battle between a panzer and a man with a rifle. However, your use of the photograph is very poignant.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
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Comment from papa55mike
Awesome! It seems to happen that way when you least expect it, death comes a calling. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Awesome! It seems to happen that way when you least expect it, death comes a calling. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Comment from Bill Schott
This flash fiction story, Battle Field, finds that the pressure to win and stay alive sometimes drives men to attempt the impossible. So it was with Mark. There are soldiers and then there are soldiers, but a tank is always a tank. Quick read and a sad ending.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This flash fiction story, Battle Field, finds that the pressure to win and stay alive sometimes drives men to attempt the impossible. So it was with Mark. There are soldiers and then there are soldiers, but a tank is always a tank. Quick read and a sad ending.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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